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by Burning Angel
Mon Nov 05, 2012 11:25 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

Totally agree. I'm not doing so much thing about all this but I must say that if I would be the typesetter guy, I would have seriously said something like this much before! Seriously, to be honest, who actually care this much, except the "grammarnazies"! (I'm quoting) about such a perfect translati...
by Burning Angel
Sun Oct 07, 2012 1:07 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

Fuck it. Find yourselves a new typesetter.
Fine, don't change it. Keep it as it was. Whatever.
by Burning Angel
Sun Oct 07, 2012 10:44 am
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

In case you were bored Guren... Page 19 Nova: In people's hearts, there's no boundary between “normality” and “insanity” and so on , // In people's hearts, the barrier between “normality” and “insanity” doesn't exist , N: there's only a “thousand forms of insanity”. // there's only a “thousand shade...
by Burning Angel
Thu Oct 04, 2012 12:33 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 116 Translation Script
Replies: 8
Views: 4074

Re: GLO 116 Translation Script

Page 11 *Capoera: Incorrect spelling. Kayna should have said capoeira. A bare fighting discipline of Brazilian origins . It makes use of many different elaborate and acrobatic foot techniques. // *Capoera: Incorrect spelling. Kayna should have said capoeira. An unarmed fighting discipline of Brazili...
by Burning Angel
Thu Oct 04, 2012 11:48 am
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 116 Translation Script
Replies: 8
Views: 4074

Re: GLO 116 Translation Script

Page 6 K: It's 'cause of the unnecessary things you said??? // It's 'cause of all the unnecessary things you said??? Page 7 Soldier: Did you hear “Nova” now!? Did you hear “Nova” just now!? Page 8 Ido: If their target is Nova...capturing me should lessen the massacre!! // If their target is Nova...c...
by Burning Angel
Tue Oct 02, 2012 10:01 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

I vote for "Number 6 gynoid" the first time in the text, and then "Number 6"...
Are you referring to page 5... I would prefer that page to not change...
by Burning Angel
Tue Oct 02, 2012 9:26 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

Page 14

For now, I managed to do an emergency treatment // I managed to do an emergency treatment for the time being
by Burning Angel
Tue Oct 02, 2012 9:22 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

"Number 6" then?
Use it after page 5..
"In the meantime"
-> For the time being?
Fair enough...
by Burning Angel
Tue Oct 02, 2012 9:16 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

If you want to keep his "country" dialect, you should keep "Oye". "Oye" doesn't even sound English. This one doesn't fit in the context. It sounds weird. How about... Page 14 In the meantime , I managed to do an emergency treatment. // I managed to do an emergency treatment for the moment . Actuall...
by Burning Angel
Tue Oct 02, 2012 10:21 am
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

Page 6

F: Isn't she pitiful? // Isnt' she tragic?
by Burning Angel
Tue Oct 02, 2012 9:45 am
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

Page 3

K: It's the right time to ask'ya. // It's the right moment to ask'ya.
by Burning Angel
Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:23 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

p05 f8 : "whyja wonna" is it normal ? Is she drunk ??? How about... K: But whyja wonna do that!? This one is a gynoid and...she tricked you from the start by posing as Alita, didn't she!? // But why'd you wonna do that!? This one is just a gynoid and... she tricked you from the start by posing as A...
by Burning Angel
Mon Oct 01, 2012 2:01 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 115 Translation Script
Replies: 7
Views: 4169

Re: GLO 115 Translation Script

Page 3 Radio: It's bothering , so don't contact me any more !!! // This isn’t worth it , so don’t contact me anymore !!! R: W...wait... right for times like these there's the “self remote”*...! // W...wait... there's the “self remote”* for moments like these ...! *Self remote: it is similar to the b...
by Burning Angel
Sun Sep 30, 2012 11:29 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 113 Translation Script
Replies: 43
Views: 13333

Re: GLO 113 Translation Script

Does it make sense?
Yeah, change it... But now that it has been released, this correction will appear on the volume release.
by Burning Angel
Sun Sep 30, 2012 10:11 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: PHASE 113 RELEASED!!
Replies: 9
Views: 5958

Re: PHASE 113 RELEASED!!

Page 18

A6: For only trapping it, it's in this state. // After trapping your arm, look in what shape it's in.

I guess this is for the volume release.
by Burning Angel
Sun Sep 30, 2012 9:51 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 113 Translation Script
Replies: 43
Views: 13333

Re: GLO 113 Translation Script

You've got to be kidding me... We ask about "trapping" and you change everything else but this word... Even more, it kind of doesn't match with the next phrase. Well, it could, but with slight changes. But no. Gotta love last minute TC... XD jajajajajaja... Yeah, sorry about that... After trapping ...
by Burning Angel
Sun Sep 30, 2012 8:33 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 113 Translation Script
Replies: 43
Views: 13333

Re: GLO 113 Translation Script

As to trap/pull on, I believe Burning Angel is more qualified to comment.
OK...

Page 18

A6: For only trapping it, it's in this state. // After trapping your arm, look in what shape it's in.
by Burning Angel
Sun Sep 30, 2012 7:48 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

Rivet adores him. He changed his perspective in life and I think he's going down the same road as him. Well he doen't need to always repeat Master Nova. For example, he can say... Only the great Mr. Nova would have recognized the change, and then stick with simply Mr. Nova. That way we know that Ri...
by Burning Angel
Sun Sep 30, 2012 7:07 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 114 Translation Script
Replies: 61
Views: 23801

Re: GLO 114 Translation Script

Page 20 R: Only Master Nova would have recognized the change, // Only Mr. Nova would have recognized the change, R: However... along with the end of the war, news of Master Nova had completely stopped. // However... after the end of the war, news of Mr. Nova completely stopped. Page 21 R: According ...
by Burning Angel
Sat Sep 29, 2012 11:53 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO v17 bonus pages script
Replies: 29
Views: 10151

Re: GLO v17 bonus pages script

Ok this is my final correction on this topic (hopefully)... 3. The “Stealth Army” is composed of soldiers from the "NEW ORDER", established by Mbadi in ES 474. NEW ORDER is LADDER's exclusive army and can be authorized to operate beyond national borders under the LADDER Treaty. It’s the very first S...
by Burning Angel
Sat Sep 29, 2012 4:11 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO v17 bonus pages script
Replies: 29
Views: 10151

Re: GLO v17 bonus pages script

Here is a quick change... 3. The “Stealth Army” is composed of soldiers from the "NEW ORDER", established by Mbadi in ES 474. NEW ORDER is LADDER's exclusive army and can be authorized to operate beyond national borders under LADDER Treaty. It’s the very first Solar System military unit to use optic...
by Burning Angel
Sat Sep 29, 2012 4:08 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 113 Translation Script
Replies: 43
Views: 13333

Re: GLO 113 Translation Script

The great advantage is that the final result is unique.
Yeah, we should get paid for this. I think we're as good as any professional editorial team.
by Burning Angel
Sat Sep 29, 2012 4:02 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 113 Translation Script
Replies: 43
Views: 13333

Re: GLO 113 Translation Script

Sorry for all these corrections... I can imagine how annoying it must be to correct a text over 10 times...
by Burning Angel
Sat Sep 29, 2012 3:56 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: GLO 113 Translation Script
Replies: 43
Views: 13333

Re: GLO 113 Translation Script

Ah... now I understand... in that case:

Page 21

K: A drowned body is out of our field!! // We can't do anything about a drowned body!!

K: Say it sooner if he's still tickin'!! // Spit it out if he's still tickin'!!