Totally agree.
I'm not doing so much thing about all this but I must say that if I would be the typesetter guy, I would have seriously said something like this much before!
Seriously, to be honest, who actually care this much, except the "grammarnazies"! (I'm quoting) about such a perfect ...

Fuck it. Find yourselves a new typesetter.

Fine, don't change it. Keep it as it was. Whatever.

In case you were bored Guren...

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Nova: In people's hearts, there's no boundary between “normality” and “insanity” and so on , // In people's hearts, the barrier between “normality” and “insanity” doesn't exist ,

N: there's only a “thousand forms of insanity”. // there's only a “thousand ...

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*Capoera: Incorrect spelling. Kayna should have said capoeira. A bare fighting discipline of Brazilian origins . It makes use of many different elaborate and acrobatic foot techniques. // *Capoera: Incorrect spelling. Kayna should have said capoeira. An unarmed fighting discipline of ...

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K: It's 'cause of the unnecessary things you said??? // It's 'cause of all the unnecessary things you said???


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Soldier: Did you hear “Nova” now!? Did you hear “Nova” just now!?


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Ido: If their target is Nova...capturing me should lessen the massacre!! // If their target is ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C1k_ft4L ... re=related

That was a good series... The Prisoner...

I vote for "Number 6 gynoid" the first time in the text, and then "Number 6"...

Are you referring to page 5... I would prefer that page to not change...

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For now, I managed to do an emergency treatment // I managed to do an emergency treatment for the time being

"Number 6" then?

Use it after page 5..

"In the meantime"
-> For the time being?

Fair enough...

If you want to keep his "country" dialect, you should keep "Oye".

"Oye" doesn't even sound English.

This one doesn't fit in the context. It sounds weird.

How about...

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In the meantime , I managed to do an emergency treatment. // I managed to do an emergency treatment for the moment ...

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F: Isn't she pitiful? // Isnt' she tragic?

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K: It's the right time to ask'ya. // It's the right moment to ask'ya.

p05 f8 : "whyja wonna" is it normal ? Is she drunk ???

How about...

K: But whyja wonna do that!? This one is a gynoid and...she tricked you from the start by posing as Alita, didn't she!? // But why'd you wonna do that!? This one is just a gynoid and... she tricked you from the start by posing ...

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Radio: It's bothering , so don't contact me any more !!! // This isn’t worth it , so don’t contact me anymore !!!

R: W...wait... right for times like these there's the “self remote”*...! // W...wait... there's the “self remote”* for moments like these ...!

*Self remote: it is similar to ...

Does it make sense?

Yeah, change it... But now that it has been released, this correction will appear on the volume release.

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A6: For only trapping it, it's in this state. // After trapping your arm, look in what shape it's in.

I guess this is for the volume release.

You've got to be kidding me... We ask about "trapping" and you change everything else but this word... Even more, it kind of doesn't match with the next phrase. Well, it could, but with slight changes. But no. Gotta love last minute TC...

XD jajajajajaja... Yeah, sorry about that...

After ...

As to trap/pull on, I believe Burning Angel is more qualified to comment.

OK...

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A6: For only trapping it, it's in this state. // After trapping your arm, look in what shape it's in.

Rivet adores him. He changed his perspective in life and I think he's going down the same road as him.

Well he doen't need to always repeat Master Nova. For example, he can say...

Only the great Mr. Nova would have recognized the change,

and then stick with simply Mr. Nova. That way we know ...

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R: Only Master Nova would have recognized the change, // Only Mr. Nova would have recognized the change,

R: However... along with the end of the war, news of Master Nova had completely stopped. // However... after the end of the war, news of Mr. Nova completely stopped.


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R ...

Ok this is my final correction on this topic (hopefully)...

3. The “Stealth Army” is composed of soldiers from the "NEW ORDER", established by Mbadi in ES 474. NEW ORDER is LADDER's exclusive army and can be authorized to operate beyond national borders under the LADDER Treaty. It’s the very first ...

Here is a quick change...

3. The “Stealth Army” is composed of soldiers from the "NEW ORDER", established by Mbadi in ES 474. NEW ORDER is LADDER's exclusive army and can be authorized to operate beyond national borders under LADDER Treaty. It’s the very first Solar System military unit to use ...

The great advantage is that the final result is unique.

Yeah, we should get paid for this. I think we're as good as any professional editorial team.

Sorry for all these corrections... I can imagine how annoying it must be to correct a text over 10 times...

Ah... now I understand... in that case:

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K: A drowned body is out of our field!! // We can't do anything about a drowned body!!

K: Say it sooner if he's still tickin'!! // Spit it out if he's still tickin'!!