really nice!

Nice Job!

I was under the impression that this model was meant to be a bit more realistic than anime-style. In fact I said I did not mean to do it in cartoon style
(anyway if you take a character from a manga style , something you have to leave.)

These Girls are real but have big eyes ...This does not mean ...

mmm no your model is better :D
if you see
http://www.rippersanime.com/Forum/download/file.php?id=105&mode=view
The body is absolutely perfect but the eyes are differents
I not say that she should be in cartoon style But your eyes are key to the identity of the character ... no?

She has a very ...

Sorry, my english is terrible
I just wanted to say that she is characterized by lips like an octopus and very big eyes
I'd like to see how she is with eyes bigger

Hello Your work is fantastic! you really have my compliments
What is your goal? create a short film?

p.s. if I can only suggest a detail, I think his eyes are really big Alita