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by MaxTKOA
Sat Aug 29, 2020 9:36 pm
Forum: Battle Angel Alita ( Last Order / Mars Chronicle )
Topic: Gummn - Mars Chronicle 036 (part 2) Is out!
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Re: Gummn - Mars Chronicle 036 (part 2) Script

At the end of page 5, I'd probably say something more along the lines of "There's no way she can keep this up" "Stay down until she's outta ammo", and on 13 I would change Keun's line to "Don't freak me out, I have a weak heart", and at the end of 17 "Open fire" would seem to fit better than "Ready...