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Post by Twitchywrote » Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:27 pm

[quote="crazyankan"]It`s out now.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CUJYEWT1
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http://data.fuskbugg.se/skalman01/Glo75.zip[/quo

I posted it, then accidentally deleted it....REALLY short chapter...

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Post by crazyankan » Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:49 pm

I deleted it :oops: , I was thinking one topic was enough.
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Post by Batousai » Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:38 am

vilma21 wrote: anyone else actully fight ?
i do some Bujinkan Ninpo Taijutsu from time to time... and no, there are no competitions for that art other than All-style Open... Mainly to keep the old traditions intact, which at the same time means that if you would actually use the techniques in a fight you'd end up hurting your opponent bad... for reference, the unarmed part is pretty much all gouken fighting...
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Post by Dwakey » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:36 am

This series is turning out so different from what I thought it'd end up being like... and I thought the vampire saga was odd.

Theory time:
Venus wins against Zekka/Toji, with BioZekka and such,
SuperNova creates BioGally enhanced by Venus' genetic yatta,
Space Angels have to fight Venus' BioGally/Zekka?

Chances are that won't happen, GLO has been throwing so many curve balls at me lately.

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Post by Kamui04 » Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:48 pm

And so, here's the script, enjoy!

Page 1
Phase;75 Tide is turning
TL Note: The English title was already written in katakana.
Text: Let's decide who is Number One!!

Page 2-3
J. Gerambo: We're in the 7th day of this 10th ZOTT plagued with problems!!
Text: What's behind the scenes in this troublesome ZOTT...!?
J. Gerambo: For the purpose of repairing the arena and strengthening the security for the audience...
J. Gerambo: The B Block Semifinal match pitting Venus representative Genome Kingdom VS Space Karate Allies has been postponed for two days.


Page 4
panel1
J. Gerambo: And they're requesting the spectators to sign this document.
J. Gerambo: It says "By entering to watch the matches I'm aware nobody will be held responsible for any property damage or personal injury caused to myself”.
TL Note: Can anyone rephrase it so it sounds more like one of those clauses where a company won't be held responsible for any damage, or is this good enough?
panel2
H. Hopper: In other words, you won't be able to complain even if you die watching the rest of the matches!!
J. Gerambo: Oh! Mr. Hopper you remained here!?
J. Gerambo tiny text: You're alive & kicking.
H. Hopper: It's natural for me~
H. Hopper: I already boarded and can't leave this ship, like the Titanic!!
panel4
J. Gerambo: People who appreciate their lives are leaving one after another...
TL rant: Hopper keeps burning after all this time! At this rate, by the time the ZOTT ends he'll be charcoal.


Page 5
J. Gerambo: But on the other hand, there are a few others staying here, stretching their lives to witness this historic moment!!
Camp tent next to second bubble, banner text says: Alita's Life.
J. Gerambo: Of course! I, J. Gerambo, will as long I'm alive, continue reporting the whole story in this tournament!!


page 6
panel1:
sfx: Kohhhhhhhhh
sfx: Fuuussshhh
panel2
sfx: twitch
sfx: twitch
panel3
sfx: Fuuuuuuuuuuu
sfx: twitch
sfx: twitch



page 7
panel 1
<Alita quote: Think you've won?>
<Alita quote: You didn't take me seriously!!>
<Zekka quote: An underdog has no qualification to cancel this Tournament!!>
<Zekka quote: Your only use is signing documents!!>
panel 2
<Mbadi: Those who dared to disturb Trinidad's meditation...>
<Mbadi: I'll grant them certain death!!>
panel3
<Mbadi: Without fail, they'll atone for their sins!!>
panel4
Tzykrow: Ma... Masteeer...


page 8
panel1
Tzykrow: Ma... Masteeer's loyal servaaant...
Tzykrow: It's... It's...guahh... me, Tzykrow!!
TL Note: Name change to Tzykrow as suggested by Hepar based on what he found in wiki.
panel2
Mbadi: Tzykrow...
Mbadi: So, you were alive.
panel3
Tzykrow: Bei... Being stubborn... is one of my strong points...
Tzykrow: Gehehe


page 9
panel1
Tzykrow: Ouuhhh
Tzykrow: To be given the privilege of licking master's honorable feet like this...
Tzykrow: this Tzykrow is perfectly happy...
panel2
Mbadi: And?
Mbadi: What about your job?
panel3
Tzykrow: Ahh...! To report this important information to my master as soon as possible...
Tzykrow: I had to overcome insurmountable difficulties.
panel4
Mbadi: Oh! Important information.
Mbadi: And?
panel5
Tzykrow: The intruder to the Central Core Block!!
Tzykrow: It was my old damned pupil, Klinge Yoko.
TL Note: The old translation as well as the kanji is Razor, but the furigana has it as Kuringe (クリンゲ), dunno if someone who knows german can make out something from it.


page 10
panel1
Tzykrow: Pii!?
panel2
Mbadi: You know how many days old is this information... !?
sfx: splat splat
panel3
Mbadi: You useleeessss!!


page 11
panel1
Tzykrow: Gepiiiiiii~!?
panel2
Afro-Nova: My goodness! You're losing your temper...
Afro-Nova: It can't be blamed.
panel3
Mbadi: Haa
Mbadi: Haa
panel4
Afro-Nova: The tide is turning... The effect of Alita's come-back is immesurable.
Afro-Nova: This is why the human world is so interesting... kukuku!!


page 12
panel1
Afro-Nova: Can you give me this man!?
panel2
Mbadi: Do as you wish!!
panel3
Afro-Nova: Then without reservation!!


page13
Announcer: We're currently taking off from Ketheres with our final destination: Mars Olympus spaceport.
Text: Where is this stormy tournament heading...!?


So it seems Super-Nova is heading to Mars. That means we'll see some development there while the ZOTT semifinal & final take place or maybe some surprise awaits us after the ZOTT.
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Post by hepar » Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:53 pm

TL Note: The old translation as well as the kanji is Razor, but the furigana has it as Kuringe (クリンゲ), dunno if someone who knows german can make out something from it.
die Klinge - a blade.
Afro-Nova: The tide is turning... The effect of Alita's come-back is immesurable.
What tide is he talking about?
TL Note: Previous translation had his name as Raven Tsai. But the japanese raw has his name as "Tsaikurou", might be Tsai Crowe or Crow.
Wiki says that he's "Tzykrow der Rabe" (Tzykrow "the Crow")
Tzykrow is a direct reference to the character Zycrow seen in Yukito Kishiro's previous manga series Aqua Knight, both in name and appearance.

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Post by crazyankan » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:10 pm

Many thanks Kumai04!!

http://data.fuskbugg.se/skalman01/Phase ... anime].rar

I made another quick scanlation. Please don`t spread it(no nyaatorrents and stuff like that)
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Post by crazyankan » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:19 pm

Hepar wrote.
Afro-Nova: The tide is turning... The effect of Alita's come-back is immesurable.
What tide is he talking about?

An expression that Alita had her moment, but now it`s Novas turn to shine.

Maybe not the best description of the expression, but I hope you understand.
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Post by HumanRage » Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:18 pm

"tide" reffers to the tide of events ... the flow of fate, how the tables are turning right now, while they thought they won and in fact, alita's team managed to reverse the steam

sorry for using more images to explain an image :P
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Post by Sergio Nova » Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:56 pm

crazyankan wrote:Alita could be a member in Mini Moni. All members are 1.5 m (4 ft 11 in) in height or shorter.

Musicvideo from them http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3pff8VEKKkY

Really hopes that Ritual can get their hands on the scans this week.
Mini Moni? Ridiculous!!
They could perhaps inspire pedophiles :D, as it common to many Japanese productions, but not serious manga readers. I cannot see any relation.

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Post by hepar » Sat Feb 23, 2008 7:38 pm

HumanRage wrote:"tide" reffers to the tide of events ... the flow of fate, how the tables are turning right now, while they thought they won and in fact, alita's team managed to reverse the steam

sorry for using more images to explain an image :P
So it's wave function that connects different events in different times? It's just pretty hard for me to understand the proper way to translate it into my own lang. Thanks anyway.

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Post by Akumeno » Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:14 pm

Yay Guys thaks for the chapert story is getting a speedy unexpected movement, and I fear what Supernoba could do in mars with Tsai; BTW I Practice Tae Kwon Do
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Post by linkinllove » Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:24 pm

Afro-Nova needs Tsai-Crow to use another Kunstler vs Gally.
Using hacking and Panzer Kunst... danger!


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Oh, please, Kishiro, do Sechs stronger :P

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Post by hepar » Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:58 pm

Here's the fully-cleaned first page for you! Use it wise. :wink:
http://i32.tinypic.com/2z705sy.jpg

BTW.
page 5: what's written on a table near 2-nd bubble?

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Post by Kamui04 » Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:18 pm

hepar wrote: BTW.
page 5: what's written on a table near 2-nd bubble?
Alita's Life or Alita Life.

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Post by Batousai » Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:46 pm

hepar wrote:
TL Note: The old translation as well as the kanji is Razor, but the furigana has it as Kuringe (クリンゲ), dunno if someone who knows german can make out something from it.
die Klinge - a blade.
Well, for once I think Viz actually succeded in a somewhat acceptable translation. Since the kanji is "Razor" and the furigana sugests "Klinge" they put together a combo: "Razierklinge" (razorblade). This also jibes pretty well with Yoko's/Aita's preference for elbow blades, instead of translating the kanji straight off...

EDIT: The callsigns from the "Mauser kampf gruppe", "Tsykrow der Rabe" and "Yoko von die Razierklinge", also jibes pretty well with the overall german themed Panzer Kunst...
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Post by Sergio Nova » Sat Feb 23, 2008 11:15 pm

Comments on translation:

Phase_75
page 04 - People WHO appreciate… (let's respect the rules!!)
page 08/09 - Tsai Crow or Tsai Crowe? You must decide.

We already have have 292 pages in volume 11?
Or have we already entered volume 12?

By the way, should we name this version of Nova as Super Nova or Afro Nova? That point is also persisting.

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Post by Batousai » Sun Feb 24, 2008 12:18 am

if an english word should be used at all, wouldn't Raven be better? (Don't remember the original japanese word)
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Post by Chrome » Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:07 am

Sergio wrote:Comments on translation:

Phase_75
page 04 - People WHO appreciate… (let's respect the rules!!)
page 08/09 - Tsai Crow or Tsai Crowe? You must decide.

We already have have 292 pages in volume 11?
Or have we already entered volume 12?

By the way, should we name this version of Nova as Super Nova or Afro Nova? That point is also persisting.
Super Nova seems more appropriate, because of the pun on supernova... Seems like something the character would do.I can't read Japanese, but i think you'll find the same thing in the original text.

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Post by MrFaber » Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:02 am

I wouldn't expect the freak get back, and now that he licks feet , he is definatelu identical to his sosia on aqua knight :)

Anyway, routhing to Mars? Sudden "big plot" suspectet? Mmmm.. i really start to think we are reading the last few phases of last order, and i fear for another quick ending just to close everything still hangling.

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Post by HumanRage » Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:51 am

hepar wrote:
HumanRage wrote:"tide" reffers to the tide of events ... the flow of fate, how the tables are turning right now, while they thought they won and in fact, alita's team managed to reverse the steam

sorry for using more images to explain an image :P
So it's wave function that connects different events in different times? It's just pretty hard for me to understand the proper way to translate it into my own lang. Thanks anyway.
WUT ? no.

it's more like, you know when sometimes all seems to happen according to your plan, everything is good, and then, everything is going unpredictable, things are not what they should be, you are no longer in lead of the situation anymore ?

that change is called "a turn of tide", it's an idiomatic expression, that can only be translated with the matching expression in another language (should that translation very far from a word-by-word translation)
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Post by HumanRage » Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:53 am

Sergio wrote:Comments on translation:

Phase_75
page 04 - People WHO appreciate… (let's respect the rules!!)
page 08/09 - Tsai Crow or Tsai Crowe? You must decide.

We already have have 292 pages in volume 11?
Or have we already entered volume 12?

By the way, should we name this version of Nova as Super Nova or Afro Nova? That point is also persisting.
vol 11 is already out ... this ishould be 2nd or 3rd chapter of vol12, but i didn't check
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Post by Kamui04 » Sun Feb 24, 2008 8:51 am

Sergio wrote:Comments on translation:

Phase_75
page 04 - People WHO appreciate… (let's respect the rules!!)
page 08/09 - Tsai Crow or Tsai Crowe? You must decide.
page 04 - corrected
page 08/09 - I guess you're referring to the fast scanlation, because I changed the name in the script to Tzycrow as suggested by Hepar, many hours before your post.

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Post by Cailon » Sun Feb 24, 2008 11:54 am

@ hepar:
Are you german? Cause you translated Klinge- Razor... The best german expression for that might be "Das Blatt hat sich gewendet" (= "the page has turned around"). We could also say "Das Schicksalsrad dreht sich weiter" or something (="The wheel of fortune turns"), but i think the "Blatt"- thing is better. Like HumanRage said, first Alita was torn into pieces, now she comes back better than ever, ripping Mbadis fingers off.
Anyway, its very far away from "turn the tide"... ;)

@Battousai:
Good suggest. There is a saying in german "rasiermesserscharf" ("sharp like a razorblade"), so the razorblade- tl would fit to the meaning of her cognomen. Just a little note: its "Rasierklinge", with /s/ and its "Yoko von DER Rasierklinge", although just "Yoko die Rasierklinge" would sound better, similar to just "Tsycrow der Rabe". Enough german for today ;)


page 10, panel3
Mbadi: You useleeess!! ---> Is the object missing? I'd say, either: "You're useleeess!!" or: "You useleeess ... (=son of a bitch or sth.)!!"

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