GLO 95 Translation Script

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GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by TargaryenX » Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:17 am

Page 01
Side Text: It's the ZOTT finals! The power of the "Legendary Fist" is revealed!!

panel 1
Gerambo: We've got a replay on the high-speed camera!!
Gerambo: Zekka counters Sechs' Imploding Expansion Punch...

panel 2
Gerambo: with another expansion punch!?

panel 3
Gerambo: Sechs was hit by the counterattack!!
Germabo: All in the blink of an eye!!

Page 02
Zekka: I've got a Fizziroy body, just like you.
Zekka: Did you think I wouldn't have any long-range attacks?
Text: Sechs is being toyed with!!
Title: You're a real pro!!

Page 03
panel 1
Hopper: Th...that's right! That was Zekka's legendary long-range attack, rumored to be able to take down a combat helicopter from 2 kilometers away!!
Hopper: Until now, nobody knew exactly what kind of technique it was...It was really an expansion punch!!

panel 2
Gerambo: But look at that!
Gerambo: What incredible speed...!!
Germabo: Now I understand why nobody has ever lived to talk about it!!

panel 3
Sechs: I..I couldn't follow it...
Sechs: But...I'm alive, which means...

panel 4
Sechs: This fucker went easy on me!!
SFX: crunch

Page 04
panel 1
Rakan: Woah!! Master Zekka's punches have a range of 2 kilometers!?
Rakan: That's just excessive!!

panel 2
Rakan: So that means we're all inside his attack range!?
Rakan: Pretty scary, huh!? Hee hee hee!!

panel 3
Rakan: Don't you ag...

panel 4
SFX: bang

Page 05
panel 1
SFX: swish whoosh swish

panel 2
Rakan: ...ree?
SFX: fsssh

panel 3
Zazie: I guess I won't be able to go straight for a headshot after all.
SFX: kakah

panel 4
Zazie: When fighting a fast, close-range fighter who can dodge my rifle bullets...
Zazie: First, I need to attack his legs to get him to stay in one place....
Rakan: Oops
Rakan: Woah
Rakan: Huwaaaah
SFX: bam bam bam bam bam

Page 06
panel 1
Zazie: ...Then immediately hit his body!!
Rakan: Urk.
SFX: kakakakah

panel 2
Zazie: And once I hit, keep shooting until he goes down!!
Zazie: That's the theory, anyway...

Page 07
Gerambo: Rakan is trapped in Zazie's hail of bullets!!
Gerambo: Is this fight over already!?
SFX: kakakakah kakakah

Page 08
panel 1
SFX: tak

panel 2
SFX: kachak

panel 3
SFX(zazie): clack
SFX(rakan): stamp

panel 4
Rakan: ah...
Rakan: ahh...
Rakan: aah...
SFX: scrrrt scrrrt grrrmmm

panel 5
Zazie: I emptied a whole clip into him without hitting any vitals...?
Zazie: And what's with that weird noise!?

Page 09
panel 1
Rakan: HOH!
SFX: kapow

panel 3
SFX(in bubble): zing
SFX(in bubble):swish
SFX: kakakakah

Page 10
panel 1
SFX: tok tok tok tok tok tok

panel 2
SFX: zwip

panel 3
Rakan: POH!
SFX: pow

Page 11
panel 1
Zazie: Ugh...
SFX(gunshots hitting ground): tak thok tok
SFX(near zazie's head): fwish shak
SFX(near zazie's feet): tatak

panel 2
Gerambo: Wh...What just happened!?
Gerambo: I thought I saw those bullets hit him, but he just fired them back!?

Page 12
panel 1
Zazie: None of the bullets I use are magnetic...
Zazie: Besides, an electromagnetic shield can only deflect bullets...reflecting them 360 degrees would be
impossible...

panel 2
Zazie: There must be something under his uniform...!!

panel 3
Rakan: You sure are calm, missy!
Rakan: Most gunmen would instinctively return fire when I use my "bullet reflector".

panel 4
Rakan: Maybe it's just the way gunners are, but they usually keep shooting until they're turned into a honeycomb by their own bullets.
Rakan: The fact that you took time to pause and analyze me means...

Page 13
panel 1
Rakan: ...You
Rakan: are a real pro!!

panel 2
Hopper: I always thought that karate was an unarmed style...I did see something in there during the fight against the Venusian team, but I thought it was just a Sumo thong...
Hopper: If you think about it, Rakan is a professional killer from the underworld, where rules don't matter...!!
Hopper: It should have been obvious that he would have a defense against firearms!!
SFX: Ooooooh

panel 3
Zazie: The bullets I fired tumbled* and his body armor was able to stop them, preventing most of the damage.
Zazie: I don't know what kind of trick he's using...
Zazie: But I doubt he can reflect all of my bullets all of the time.

panel 4
Zazie: Lets find out!!
SFX: pssh

Footnote: *Tumbling bullet...A phenomenon where the bullet doesn't strike at the tip, but rolls in midair and hits the target sideways. This greatly reduces the accuracy and penetrating power.

Page 14
panel 1
SFX: voosh voosh voosh

panel 2
Rakan: There we go!
Rakan: Obviously, I can't reflect explosives!!

panel 3
Rakan: But grenades are slower than bullets...
Rakan: Not only that, but I know that their safety device won't let them detonate less than 20 meters away from where they were fired.

panel 4
Rakan: So the best plan is to charge straight in!!
SFX: boom

Page 15
panel 1
SFX: shoom

panel 2
Zazie: Good, I thought you might...

panel 3
Zazie: Try that!!
SFX: bizzzzzt

Page 16
panel 1
Rakan: Wh...
Rakan: Whaaaaaat!?

panel 2
Rakan: What the hell is that!?

Page 17
panel 1
Rakan: A shotgun!?
Rakan: No, these bullets are moving waaaay too fast for that!!

panel 2
Rakan: Not good!
Rakan: The grenades...!!

panel 3
SFX: tok

Page 18-19
SFX: dhoom dhoom dadhoom

Page 20
panel 1
Gerambo: Zazie pulls off a skillful weapon combination!!
Gerambo: Could it even have defeated Rakan the indestructible pervert!?
SFX: foom

panel 2
Hopper: That gun in Zazie's left hand sure is flashy!!

panel 3
Gerambo: It's a rare weapon called the Donner MK21 MSG.

panel 4
Gerambo: An MSG...or Multi-stack Gun* is a miniature version of a vehicle mounted assault weapon.
Gerambo: The weapon is loaded with caseless bullets stacked inside the barrels, which are fired via electric
current. Because of this loading method, it can reach firing rates of over 10,000 rounds per second. It's really
a monster of a gun!!

Footnote: *Multi-stack Gun: Based on the "Stacked Projectile System", patented by the Australia-based company Metal Storm Limited.

Page 21
panel 1
Gerambo: Ah...!
SFX: Woosh

panel 2
Zazie: From behind!?

panel 3
SFX: whack

panel 4
SFX: shhank

Page 22
panel 1
SFX: tak

panel 2
Rakan: I got inside the rifle!!
Rakan: This is my chance!!

panel 3
Rakan: Huh!?

Page 23
panel 1
Rakan: Why? Why do you have two extra arms!?

panel 2
SFX: ping

panel 3
SFX: ting

panel 4
SFX: tang pang

Page 24
panel 1
SFX: bang bang bang bang bang

panel 2
SFX: bam

panel 3
SFX: tatak

panel 4
Rakan: Whoo, boy! That freaked me out!
Rakan: What was that!?
SFX: twitch twitch

Page 25
panel 1
Zazie: These exo-arms are a trick I picked up in special ops!!

panel 2
Rakan: Woah, you're amazing!! Hee hee hee!!
Rakan: You're the first gunman I've fought that's managed to survive after I got into close combat range!!

Text: A fight where a single mistake means death!!
Last edited by TargaryenX on Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:06 am, edited 4 times in total.

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by kvhokuto » Sun Dec 20, 2009 6:47 am

I love this guy!

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by crazyankan » Sun Dec 20, 2009 6:54 am

TargaryenX: Thank you, again!

Lemonlol has started with the cleaning.
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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by Burning Angel » Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:04 pm

That was fast.

Page 04
panel 1
Rakan: That's just excessive!!// That's just too much!!

Page 05
panel 4
Zazie: When fighting a fast, close-range fighter who can dodge my rifle bullets//When fighting a fast, close-range fighter who can dodge my rifle bullets....
Zazie: First, I need to attack his legs to get him to stay in one place....//First, I need to attack his legs to get him to stay still....

Page 07
Gerambo: Rakan is trapped in Zazie's hail of bullets!!//Rakan is trapped in Zazie's storm of bullets!!

Page 08
panel 5
Zazie: I emptied a whole clip into him without hitting any vitals...?//I emptied a whole clip into him without hitting any vital organs...?

Page 12
panel 3
Rakan: You sure are calm missy!//You sure are calm, missy!

Page 13
panel 3
Zazie: The bullets I fired tumbled* and his body armor was able to stop them, preventing most of the damage.//The bullets I fired tumbling* and his body armor was able to stop them, preventing most of the damage.
Zazie: But I doubt he can reflect all of my bullets all of the time.//But I doubt he can reflect all of my bullets simultaniously.

Footnote: *Tumbled bullet... A phenomenon where the bullet doesn't strike at the tip, but rolls in midair and hits the target sideways. This greatly reduces the accuracy and penetrating power.//*Tumbling bullet: A phenomenon where the bullet doesn't strike at the tip, but rolls in midair and hits the target sideways. This greatly reduces the accuracy and penetrating power.

Page 20
panel 4
Gerambo: The weapon is loaded with caseless bullets stacked inside the barrels, which are ignited by electric
current.//The weapon is loaded with caseless bullets stacked inside the barrels, which are fired by electric current.

Footnote: *Multi Stack Gun...Based on the "Stacked Projectile System", patented by the Australia-based company Metal Storm Limited.//*Multi Stack Gun: Based on the "Stacked Projectile System", patented by the Australia-based company Metal Storm Limited.

Page 25
panel 2
Rakan: You're the first gunman I've fought that's managed to survive after I closed to attack range!!//You're the first gunman I've fought that's managed to survive after I penetrated into close combat range!!

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by TargaryenX » Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:12 pm

Edited :)

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by Sergio Nova » Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:41 pm

After Burning Angel, there's not much to comment.

page 06
panel 2
Zazie: That's the theory, anyway… (missing comma)

page 24
panel 4
Rakan: Whoo, boy! That freaked me out! (Punctuation)

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by Cailon » Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:12 pm

There would be tears of joy over this fast translation, plus correction plus the cleaning is on its way, but it all is going so fast, my skin is tottering towards the back of my head like I'm in a centrifuge. There is no way I coul shed a tear in this kind of situation :D

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by Dharko » Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:35 am

:shock: no words...... :cry:

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by D-Scape » Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:22 pm

That was faster than both Zazie and Rakan! Great work.

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by Rothfuchs » Tue Dec 22, 2009 10:16 am

Damn, you guys pull out the translations more faster than i would have expected...and i love it!

So for the whole Chapter, seems Rakan and Zazie are quite some tricksters who learned their lessons in life...
Will be interesting who has the last ace up his sleeves.

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by DDTL » Tue Dec 22, 2009 6:06 pm

Thank you very much guys ! :D
TRY GETTING A RESERVATION AT DORSIA NOW YOU FUCKING STUPID BASTARD! YOU, FUCKING BASTARD!

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Re: GLO 95 Translation Script

Post by BeastSoulEyes » Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:13 am

Page 03
panel 1
Hopper: Th...that's right! That was Zekka's legendary long-range attack, rumored to be able to take down a combat helicopter from 2 kilometers away!!
//
Hopper: Th...that's right! That was Zekka's legendary long-ranged attack, rumored to be able to take down a combat helicopter from 2 kilometers away!!
Hopper: Until now, nobody knew exactly what kind of technique it was...It was really an expansion punch!!

long-range is proper, imo.

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