Gunnm - Mars Chronicle 045 (part 1) Is out!

[FluffyMcMittens]

The latest chapter is here!

Spoiler:

Reading this untranslated and then translated to get a clue what happened.
In my mind it went totally different on the first read.

https://mega.nz/file/WY8hkADC#Lqd8tcqGV ... JJOZOjyTMg

https://www77.zippyshare.com/v/UqwdGLSd/file.html

[00_unit]

Once again too short I noticed the second half tends to be better than the first half, don't know why maybe more dialogue not too sure just something I notice. Also better when combined as a whole as well. Rarely I see both being equally good

Also same I thought

Spoiler:

She gave them a bomb and tell them to pull it since they failed and to kill themselves but it was much more different than I thought.

Also glad the author use the terminology out of body experience as I can't be the only one who thought that is what she was experiencing

[Silvery]

Thank you for the chapter! I don't want to sound ungrateful, but I have noticed a couple of small mistakes in the latest chapters; if you ever need a beta reader, I would be glad to help!

[00_unit]

Thank you for the chapter! I don't want to sound ungrateful, but I have noticed a couple of small mistakes in the latest chapters; if you ever need a beta reader, I would be glad to help!

That is a pretty common occurrence with the translators tbh. I shrug it off as it beats not having a translator at all.

[Silvery]

That is a pretty common occurrence with the translators tbh. I shrug it off as it beats not having a translator at all.

I didn't say I had a problem with it (there's a reason why I thank for every chapter unless I'm super late to the party for life reasons); I just said that I was willing to help. We used to have threads with preliminary scripts where people could weigh in, so it's not like there's no precedent for this TL group.

[00_unit]

That is a pretty common occurrence with the translators tbh. I shrug it off as it beats not having a translator at all.

I didn't say I had a problem with it (there's a reason why I thank for every chapter unless I'm super late to the party for life reasons); I just said that I was willing to help. We used to have threads with preliminary scripts where people could weigh in, so it's not like there's no precedent for this TL group.

Sorry my misinterpretation I just thought you notice the errors recently as I noticed them chapters ago but you are saying you are in the mood to help recently and yes that make sense it never bothered but you would like to contribute to the team to help increase its quality all good.