Cailon wrote:So, what now? I'm desperate... Will this chapter ever be released?
Dharko or newbieff, if you read this, can't you take a look at the pointed pages again, please?
Ok, I´ll check this.
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p29: Toji says something.
TOJI: WHAT...
p25: need an English name for the technique.
There are only "onomatopeyas": !ZUU GAA!
GERAMBO: ¡¡HE DID IT!!
The Technique name: "Super Shell Battle Model three"
p22: still missing some stuff
bubble 1: Vigorta [this is the monster´s name] throws now from Its fingers a concentration of fire´s guns to Taraba!!
bubble 2: What kind of things they build now!?
bubble 3: I have heard that they can match modern weapons… but have never thought that they would be this powerful!!
bubble 4: Pissarro: This is an improved version of the "Shisotsushi" [tooth-tongue-tooth attack] of primitive shells.
bubble 5: Pissarro: It consist in this: In close range, It can have a more powerful piercing ability than a 100 mm ramjet cannon!!
bubble 6: Taraba: WHAAA!!
FOOTNOTE: the "Shisotsushi" attack [literally tooth-tongue-tooth] is an attack style with shells shot by an imitation of proboscide.
The proboscide [greek languaje: pro-"previous" and baskein-"for eat"] is an lengthened appendix tubular located in the head of the animal.
Their more common use is to eat and to swallow as the case of certain spineless ones as the butterflies.
p21: need a translation of the footnote
I AM SORRY
p20: shishu-face? strange name, all the others had European fictional monsters. But I can't find anything about Shishu. Does anybody have some more information?
Is the literal translation: SHISHU-FACE.
p14: first line. Choose one.
From the way the question are asked, you can notice IT!
To your approach.
p12: the rest of the fotenote. I use will be using Kynokephalos.
Man wolf [Kynokephalos], in the Greek mythology, It is somebody that has dog face.
p10: I will promptly obtain this trophy with all my energy.
It´s OK
p10: We are going to use Bigorne and Chicheface for the names.
Literal translation: SHISHU-FACE and VIGORTA.
P08-09: it's probably "Are you hungry, Alduína?", because in the next page he will give him some prey.
I am hungry... Alduina.
p6: 5 lines. Only four bubbles. Throw one away.
To your approach. I say that:
bubble 1: taking the victory from the hand of the military superpower "Jupiter Federation" four consecutive times is not something that can be taken lightly!
The military superpower Jupiter federation imitated these military matters, for that reason, They weren´t invited to the last 4 consecutive championships!!
p5: We need some help on that page.
bubble 1: meanwhile, because of "Ladder treat", the limitation on using nanotechnology was regulated drastically, and, because the crisys sensation, They requested help to Venus.
bubble 2: So then they started the development of bio-engineering, calling it [nanotechnology that does not use nanomachines].
bubble 3: In ES 470, taking advantage of the BIO HAZZARD, (a great biological incident, yes) as the point, Venus pushed a modification to the law that allowed the production and consumption of biological objects ( * ) and pseudo-humans.
ARROW: EVOLUTION
bubble 4: The Venusians also did bio-engineering on themselves and naturally achieved the "auto-remodelation", and now the most common and popular form of a Venusians is the egg-shaped [Humpty Dumpty] ( ** )
bubble 5: The bioengineering technology are protected by patents and copies are not allowed. The range of products vary from transportation tools and buildings to daily consumer products.
bubble 6: Currently, there are rumors that they will even be using biological organisms as space crafts and space colonies.
BOX: TAKOSHII [Takoshii Taxi], "gesigned" by Pissarro as a transportation tool.
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FOOTNOTES:
Footnotes 1 ( * ): Biological objects: a man-made thing from genetic engineering for a purpose. Even though it is created by using human genetics, it is considered by law a consumer product and therefore it does not have any right.
Footnotes 2 ( ** ): "Humpty Dumpty": popular story for children about an egg alive (a living egg) that falls of a wall, here they make reference to their shapes: rounded hands and bodies and short arms.
Footnotes 3: "OBJETÉTRE", is a contraction of french words for resume: an "object-creature", this means, a biological being that has only one purpose: to be used like a tool.
Footnotes 4: In this case Takoshii is a play of words. Tako is japanese for Octopus which it looks like. While Takkushi is the katakana the japanese use for Taxi. Also on that box it isn't "created", but designed by Pissarro.
p2: missing a bubble
Which one?
IM SORRY FOR ANY NOT WELL WRITTEN WORD.
Would be cool.
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