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Re: GLO 87

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I certainly never wanted to imply that, I just wanted to defend Yukito Kishiro, I did'nt feel personnaly targeted at all.

thanks to Cailon for the link about nazi ufo's. I have learnt much, hitherto I have only been faintly acquainted with the subject, but back in 2003 when I first read GLO 3 I didn't know anything about it. I have only heard of it years later in a documentary about how USSR and US recruited former nazi scientists to develop rocket technology for their country. However at one point they talked about a very puzzling event, according to them at the end of the WW II German engineers unaccountably turned up thousands of miles away from where they were supposed to be only hours before. I hardly knew more than that until now. But even knowing that, the presence of nazism in the universe of Gunnm just just didn't fit, well at the time GLO 8 & 9 had not been released yet and there seemed to be no link between Gunnm and our world.
well as for nazism being an Ideology... I am afraid though completely twisted flaw ridden and stupid it can be called thus, well at least it is a convenient flag in the name of which certain people see themselves as entitled to spread mindless violence.

to ack44: jojo's bizarre adventure was one of the examples I had in mind when I said that nazism was not perceived the same way in Japan as it is in the western world. in France a Dragon ball ova was censored because of the appearance of a mock Hitler character for less than 2minutes.
However this hypothesis may be interesting in terms of story telling: realizing that she belonged to a nazi group may cause a shock to Alita who may then be obliged to act as a cleansing element by wiping out the remaing kunstlers because as a fascist group they represent a danger to the the political stability of Martian government.

Shocking, I daresay.
I may have oversimplified my point, because it is obvious that Yukito Kishiro would not proceed thus. I believe that your reaction is exactly what yukito kishiro wants. What if Alita found Erica when she arrives on Mars, and decided to follow her( temporarily of course) because she is her only family. After some time Alita would come to her senses and realize that what they have done/do/ are going to do is wrong, and eventually try to convince Erica to stop and of course a confrontation would ensue. That is how I see it IF Kishiro chooses to tread this path, but as Sam said we don't really know much for the moment so the only thing we can do is waiting and make hypotheses, there are still a lot of elements that are liable to change.
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Meanwhile, litchi master, let me ask you a favour: would you please take a look at the thread about the BAA raws? We do need a French speaker help.
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I'd be glad to help, just let me a week to be fully operational, some urgent stuff that needs to be taken care of before I can be fully operational. As I own the complete edition myself there shouldn't be a problem.(as the thread was about raws I didn't think I could do anytthing as I don't speak Japanese so I never opened it) you can count me in.
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about the "because she is my angel" thing would it be possible that the mouse guy jumped in front of the rocket as a result of some hacking or some weird hypnosis like that of the starship cult? if so Erica would truly stand on equal footing with Alita or even higher. That sounds ominous.
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Heya, my emo phase is over so I'm back for more Gunnm commenting.

This phase 87 is really interesting, lots of very cool characters (especially the Benimaru-like soldier and the Venusian strategic advisor) and more black people :twisted:, at least a manga where *NOT* only big-eyed Japanese exists.

And for the mouse guy's suicide, it must be a kind of mind-control or a very advanced hacking, the guy seems good enough in cyber-attacks, so either Erika is a kind of master hacker or she attacked him on something he couldn't fight back, which would be a kind of psychic attack or more realistically, nano-technology.

edit: added the *NOT*, make a BIG difference, hopefully everyone understood that I implied that.
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To BeastSoulEyes:

I like to think that maybe he's seen her before, what she can do, and maybe assumed that he and his allies stood no chance against her. Maybe he accepted death readily for fear of what she was capable of.
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Re: GLO 87

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Yea, at first I was thinking exactly the same thing. Like he was like 'omg I prefer blowing up myself a thousand times than facing this monster'. But then the 'translation' by ack44 would not make sense.

Unless he view her as his angel of death :P . Which would be really wicked.

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litchi master wrote:about the "because she is my angel" thing would it be possible that the mouse guy jumped in front of the rocket as a result of some hacking or some weird hypnosis like that of the starship cult? if so Erica would truly stand on equal footing with Alita or even higher. That sounds ominous.
I don't really know about that. Alita's powers right now are so god-like, I don't even think there is something in the whole solar system that could stand against something like that, unless the jupiterians finally come back with some more advanced technology than the fusion of Fata Morgana and Warmen 609. IMO this version of Alita is doomed to die. No story can be made around a character that powerful. Hopefully Zekka will be the one doing it, or maybe the Damocles' Sword, time will tell/

Other than that, I just noticed, Alita's new costume kick ass! I was a bit unhappy about it at first, but seriously, her boots ahave teeths! How cool is that :D! Maybe the shoulders are a bit too much tough.
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Maybe (in the near future) she has to give Fata Morgana back or get her old brain ...
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I'd like to have a backup brain! Especially after I had one to many last night.
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more nazi ufos for those who like the idea (if you found it funny) :lol:


http://io9.com/5252809/the-fourth-reich ... oplay=true
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They really do make a movie with every shit they can find.

I don't find it funny. I know, I know, keep your shirt on, its just a movie. But remember that like the enhanced V2 (able to attack NY), these ufo-myths are just propaganda, used to create a simple "hang in there, we still can make it"- attitude.
And while the Germans kept on to "hang in there", millions of jews where executed, along with other "unworthy" people, like Sinti and Romanies. In the late days of the war, the General staff couldn't support or withdraw the front properly because all the trains where used to transport as many jews as they could into extermination camps.
Nazis are not funny and so isn't the Shoah. I know that in many countries it is not forbidden to dress, play or live like a Nazi, like here: http://streetbonersandtvcarnage.com/blo ... nazi-skit/ (I only searched for the Prince Harry-thing and found the rest.) Beacuse of these examples, its kind of "cool" to be a Nazi and it continues to be en vouge in a very strange way.
But no one would or could really make a movie about "Return of the Ku-Klux-Klan" or "Return of the Khmer Rouge", couldn't he?

And I want to say, the second part has nothing to do with GLO, because we don't know yet how the Nazis are characterized here, I doubt that they are funny.
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I agree with you in general terms, but sometimes the press exaggerates.
So, the prince went to a fantasy party characterized as a Nazi? So what? If he had gone as Torquemada no one would care, saying it was only a joke. No one would complain if he had characterized a slave trader.

I'm far from fascist, but I understand a joke as a joke, only; and a fantasy as a fantasy, nothing else.
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Sergio wrote:I'm far from fascist
Of course, no doubt! And I didn't intend to accuse anyone. Just that you dont get me wrong ;)

Then why not superman or prince Harry Potter. Like this, its a hit in the face of the victims and their children. In my opinion that only shows that he has no clue of what has happened then. If he were disguised as Torquemada or as a slave trader, normal thinking people should complain too. But if the press would, I dont know, maybe not that much, right. Or the press wouldn't even recognize him as Torquemada :?
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I've just remembered a Brazilian comedian (he's dead now) who once appeared dressed as a Gestapo high-officer, giving absurd orders. Everyone laughed, except the ones who identify themselves with Nazism and the like: the comedian was as black as the darkest night.
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Now that you mention it, Charlie Chaplin made The Great Dictator, that also is a parody.
You're right with that, a good laugh can easily "disenchant" such ideologies. :)
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That's it! Chaplin was a Communist Jew (what is important if we remember that the Nazi régime killed 6 million Jews and 9 million Communists), and he used comedy to send his political messages. Anyway, taking a genius as an example is probably not a good idea. Geniuses are always unpredictable. :D
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phase 87

p01
chapter name : unknow ennemy, stay alert

right : mission : free the olympus spaceport
on that day on mars

left : what really happened ?

p02
top right : one month before
Free Olympus spaceport mission
Operation : Hagel

bottom : who is the kunstler that xazi met ?


p04
frame2
redteam speaking, section 402.
we got control of the central administration tower
the 12 hostages are secure

footnote : section 402 : special counter terrorist new order unit, heart of this operation


p05
from right to left:
no sign of enemy commandant in chief Kilwizer
he escaped from us
order to Daimos* to strenghten the perimeter
give hostage extraction to Zamber* support
redteam, secure the central admin tower

frame2
Failure to rescue hostages from Gespenst* Sierradome !
survival of the thousand hostages is hopeless...

(footnotes not translated)

p06
K-truppe fighting at Ecko Tower
hostages seems caught in it and many casualties

left : shoot everything that moves !

frame2
general : what is that
that's what we got while forming coalitions for political reasons

frame3:
jovian : on the lack of strategy, i agree with you
if you allowed our troops to take care of that, all would have been settled simply

frame4
venusian : if we let you do it, you would have made of mars a sea of dirt to serve as ressource for the troposhpere

frame5
To realize that we would have to fight alongside our long run ennemies...

footnote : K-truppe : commando for mars liberation, also called "exterminate section"


p07
frame1
but if the ennemy's objective is to pump up the flames of war,
on the pride of the royal council, we must rescue the hostages

we count on you xazi, GG !

frame2
zebra alphateam on contact with the ennemy
closing nowember-dome exits

frame3
we managed to separate hostiles and hostages
beta team, enter the dome ! proceed sweeftly with securing hostages.

footnote : zebra : special unit, under direct command of the royal council

p09

xazi : trevor, kong, mauer : situation ?

frame2
ok from my side
here too.

p10
no sign of ennemy in surroundings yet

frame4 :
kong : they could have launched us nazi flying saucers, but they only sent robots. not sport enough

xazi : stop talking lightly kong.
betateam, situation report !

footnote : nazi flying saucers : see GLO vol3 for details


p11
here is betateam GG
hostages are all safe. send us the zamber support troups

frame2
well done !
we can engage phase II

frame3
alphateam, go supporting the Q section of venusians strangers

frame4
what, we are asked to venus's laundry ?
send us to gespenst !

xazi : command center, please give us an acceptable explanation.

footnote : venus strangers : venus troops on mars

p12
gespenst is now fighting with the K-truppe. coalition commander is already asking for a section 886 action

stop your querels !

frame2
this is our enemy objective ! to show that the coalition is impossible, and expose their power to all
we must at least show that we are not fool of that

frame3
xazi : they got a good strategist..

frame4
all in all, the ennemy that god rid of Q-truppe seems special.
we don't have any intel, so stay alert !

xazi : copy that.

footnote : section 886 : jupiter section on mars

p15
maintenance car on flame 2km ahead
no wait

frame2
there is someone on it !

p17
a woman !

p18
i lost the drone !
xazi : ennemy fire ?

frame2
no, the woman was not wearing any equipments and there wasn't any sound
i send immediatly... another drone

frame3
we have visual

frame4
i'm opening fire !
this is maybe a civilian ?

frame5
what do we do, chief ?

frame6
FIRE !

p19
no... we mustn't... shoot...

frame2
WE MUSTN'T !
you little ...

p20
because it is...
my angel...

frame2
MAAAAAAUUUUEEEEEEERRRR

p22
unforseen situation !

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What's wrong humanrage, were you bored today, or what? :wink: Thank god I'm drinking gin and tonic right now. :mrgreen:

p01
chapter name : unknow ennemy, stay alert//unknown enemy, stay alert

p02
top right : one month before//one month earlier

p05
from right to left:
no sign of enemy commandant in chief Kilwizer
he escaped from us//
no sign of enemy commander in chief Kilwizer
he escaped from us

redteam, secure the central admin tower//red team, secure the central admin tower

frame2
Failure to rescue hostages from Gespenst* Sierradome !
survival of the thousand hostages is hopeless...//the survival of the thousand hostages is hopeless...

p06
K-truppe fighting at Ecko Tower
hostages seems caught in it and many casualties//the hostages seem to be caught in the fighting and there are many casualties

frame4
venusian : if we let you do it, you would have made of mars a sea of dirt to serve as ressourcefor the troposhpere// if we let you do it, you would have made of Mars a sea of dirt to serve as raw materials for the troposphere
(3 things:
1. it is spelled "resource" and "troposphere"
2. "raw materials" fits better
3. the troposhere is a reference to the Dyson sphere that surrounds Jupiter)

frame5
To realize that we would have to fight alongside our long run ennemies...//To realize that we would have to fight alongside our long run enemies...

p07
frame1
but if the ennemy's objective is to pump up the flames of war,
on the pride of the royal council, we must rescue the hostages//
but if the enemy's objective is to fan the flames of war,
then we must rescue the hostages for the pride of the royal council (this order sounds better)

frame2
zebra alphateam on contact with the ennemy
closing nowember-dome exits//
zebra alpha team in contact with the enemy
closing November-dome's exits

frame3
we managed to separate hostiles and hostages
beta team, enter the dome ! proceed sweeftly with securing hostages.//
we've managed to separate the hostiles from the hostages
beta team, enter the dome ! proceed swiftly while securing hostages.

p10
no sign of ennemy in surroundings yet//no sign of the enemy in the surroundings yet

frame4 :
kong : they could have launched us nazi flying saucers, but they only sent robots. not sport enough//they could have launched us nazi flying saucers, but they only sent robots. This isn't fun enough.

p11
here is betateam GG
hostages are all safe. send us the zamber support troups//
this is beta team GG
the hostages are all safe. send us the zamber support troops

frame3
alphateam, go supporting the Q section of venusians strangers//alpha team, go support the Q section of the venusians strangers

p12
gespenst is now fighting with the K-truppe. coalition commander is already asking for a section 886 action//gespenst is now fighting with the K-truppe. The coalition commander is already asking for a section 886 action

frame2
this is our enemy objective ! to show that the coalition is impossible, and expose their power to all
we must at least show that we are not fool of that//
this is our enemy's objective ! to demonstrate that the coalition is impossible, and expose their power to all
we must at least show that we will not be fooled by that

frame3
xazi : they got a good strategist..//they've got a good strategist..

frame4
all in all, the ennemy that god rid of Q-truppe seems special.//all in all, the enemy that god rid of Q-truppe seems special.

p15
maintenance car on flame 2km ahead//a maintenance car on fire 2km ahead

p18
xazi : ennemy fire ?// enemy fire ?

frame2
i send immediatly... another drone//I'll send immediatly... another drone

p22
unforseen situation !// unforeseen situation !
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Re: GLO 87

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Don't forget we use Zazie( not the Japanese Xazi ザジ )!!

And the name Kilwizer? Not a single hit on google.
Almost every name (except for Vaina Barietsu) can find on google.
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Uh, just a short note by me:

Kilwizer ---> its a (new) enemy commander. Make it "Kirwitzer", that sounds like a german last name. (while I doubt this name exists, but it sounds german nonetheless)
And depending on the katakana..... "commander" is english, but "Kommandant" would be the german analogon. (because HumanRage wrote "commandant")

Zamber --> Zanber
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Phase 87 – translation script
Based on Japanese-French translation published by Minna no Manga (http://www.minnanomanga.org)
French-English retranslation by HumanRage
Quality-checking by Burning Angel, Sergio, Cailon & AOD


p01
Phse: 87 – Unknown enemy, stay alert
Up-right side text: Mission: Free Oympus Saceport
Down-right side: That day on Mars
Left side: What really happened?

p02-03
Top right: One month earlier
Free Olympus Spaceport mission
Operation: Hagel

Bottom: Who is the Künstler Zazie met?


p04
frame2
Voice: Red team speaking, section 402. We’ve secured control of the central administration tower.
Voice: The 12 hostages are secure.

footnote: Section 402: special counterterrorist new order unit, heart of this operation.

p05
from right to left:
1: No sign of enemy Kommandant-in-Chief Kirwitzer
2: He’s escaped from us.
3. Order Deimos to strengthen the perimeter.
4. Give hostage extraction to Zanber support.
5. Red team, secure the central admin tower.

frame2
1. Failed to rescue hostages from Gespenst Sierradome!
2. The thousand refugees have no hope for survival!!.

(footnotes not translated) Help us, Dharko!!!

p06
frame 1
1. K-truppe fighting at Ecko Tower
2. The hostages seem to have been caught in the fighting and there are many casualties.
3. (left): Shoot everything that moves!

frame2
General: What is that?
General: That's what we get for forming coalitions for political reasons.

frame3:
Jovian: I agree with you about the lack of strategy.
Jovian: If you’d allowed our troops to take care of that, all of this would have been settled simply.

frame4
Venusian: Preposterous!
Venusian: If we’d let you do it, you would have made Mars a sea of dirt to serve as raw materials for the troposphere.

frame5
Someone: Learning that we would have to fight alongside our longtime rivals…

footnote: K-truppe: commandos for Mars liberation, a.k.a. “extermination section”.


p07
frame1
General Yazuiji: But if the enemy's objective is to fan the embers of Mars…
General Yazuiji: Then we must rescue the hostages in the name of the Royal Council.
General Yazuiji: We’re counting on you Zazie, GG!

frame2
Transmission: Zebra alpha team in contact with the enemy!
Transmission: Closing November-dome's exits

frame3
Transmission We've managed to separate the hostiles from the hostages.
Transmission Beta team, enter the dome! Proceed swiftly while securing hostages.

footnote: Zebra: special unit, under direct command of the Royal Council.

p09
frame 1
Zazie: Trevor!
Zazie: Kong!
Zazie: Mauer!
Zazie: Situation?

frame2
Soldier 1: Okay from my side.
Soldier 2: Here too.

p10
frame 4
Soldier 3: No sign of the enemy in the surroundings yet.

frame 5:
Kong: The Nazis could've launched their flying saucers at us, but they’ve only sent robots. This is no fun.
Zazie: This is no time to be taking things lightly, Kong.
Zazie: Beta team, situation report!

footnote: Nazi flying saucers: see GLO vol. 3 for details.


p11
Transmission: Here is beta team GG!
Transmission: The hostages are all safe. send us the Zanber support troops.

frame2
General Yazuiji: Well done!
General Yazuiji: We can engage Phase II.

frame3
Operator: Alpha team, go support the Q section of the Venusian Foreign Legion.

frame4
Transmission: What, we’re being asked to deal with Venus's laundry?
Transmission : Send us to Gespenst!
Zazie: Command center, please give us an acceptable explanation.

footnote: Venusian Foreign Legion: Venus’ troops on Mars

p12
frame 1
Operator: Gespenst is now fighting with the K-truppe. The commander of the alliance is already asking for a section 886 action.
General Yazuiji: Stop your quarrels!

frame2
General Yazuiji: This is our enemy's objective!
General Yazuiji: To demonstrate that the alliance is impossible, and expose their weakness to all.
General Yazuiji: We must at least show that we will not be fooled by that!!

frame3
Zazie: They've got a good strategist..

frame4
Transmission: All in all, the enemy that has decimated Q-truppe seems special.
Transmission: We do not even have any info, unknown enemy … stay vigilant.
Zazie: Copy that.

footnote: Section 886: Jovian section on Mars.

p13
no text

p14
no text

p15
Transmission: A maintenance car on fire 2km ahead!
Transmission: No! Wait!

frame2
Transmission: There’s someone on it!

p16
no text

p17
frame 1
Transmission: A woman!

p18
Transmission:I lost the drone!
Zazie: Enemy fire?

frame2
Soldier 3: No, the woman was not wearing any equipment and there wasn't any sound.
Soldier 3: I’ll send… another drone immediately.

frame3
Transmission: We have visual.

frame4
Kong: I'm opening fire!
Soldier: Is she a civilian?

frame5
Soldier: What do we do, chief?

frame6
FIRE!

p19
frame 1
Soldier 3: no… we mustn't… shoot…

frame2
Soldier 3: WE MUSTN'T!
Soldier 3: You little …

p20
frame 1
Soldier 3: Because she is…
Soldier 3: My angel…

frame2
Soldier 3: MAUEEER
p21
no text

p22-23
Text: An unforeseen situation!
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p01
Phse: 87 – Unknow enemy, stay alert // Unknown enemy, stay alert (spelling)

p06
frame 1
2. The hostages seem to be caught in the fighting and there are many casualties. (wouldn’t it be seem to have been caught…) (I think that you are right!)

frame2
General: what is that?
General: That's what we got while forming coalitions for political reasons. // That's what we get for forming alliances for political reasons.

frame3:
Jovian: On the lack of strategy, I agree with you. // I agree with you about the lack of strategy. ( I believe that this is better sentence structure)

frame5
Someone: To realize that we would have to fight alongside our long run enemies... // Learning that we would have to fight alongside our long time enemies... (1. it sounds better 2. the phrase is "long time", not "long run")

p07
frame1
General Yazuiji: But if the enemy's objective is to fan the embers of Mars… (please, HumanRage, check the French text) // But if the enemy's objective is to fan the flames of war of Mars… (I think that is the translation)

p11
frame4
Transmission: What, we are asked to deal with Venus's layers? // What, we are asked to deal with Venus's laundry?

p12
Operator: Genst is now fighting with the K-truppe. The coalition commander is already asking for a section 886 action. // Gespenst is now fighting with the K-truppe. The commander of the alliance is already asking for a section 886 action.

frame2
General Yazuiji: To demonstrate that the coalition is impossible, and expose their power to all. // To demonstrate that the alliance is impossible, and expose their weakness to all. (By "power", do you mean lack of power (weakness)? If so, than you should change "power" to "weakness".)

p18
frame4
Kong: I'm opening fire!
Soldier: This is maybe a civilian? // Is she a civilian? (The original sentence just didn't make sense to me)

p20
frame 1
Soldier 3: Because it is... // Because she is... (the soldier is obviously talking about the woman)
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Re: GLO 87

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Re: GLO 87

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p01
Phse: 87 – Unknown enemy, stay alert
Up-right side text: Mission: Free Oympus Saceport
Down-right side: That day on Mars
Left side: What really happened?

p02-03
Top right: One month earlier
Free Olympus Spaceport mission
Operation: Hagel

Bottom: Who is the Künstler Zazie met?


p04
frame2
Voice: Red team speaking, section 402. We've secured control of the central administration tower.
Voice: The 12 hostages are secure.

footnote: Section 402: special counterterrorist new order unit, heart of this operation.

p05
from right to left:
1: No sign of enemy Kommandant-in-Chief Kirwitzer
2: He's escaped from us.
3. Order Deimos to strengthen the perimeter.
4. Give hostage extraction to Zanber support.
5. Red team, secure the central admin tower.

frame2
1. Failed to rescue hostages from Gespenst Sierradome!
2. The thousand refugees have no hope for survival!!

(footnotes not translated) Help us, Dharko!!!

p06
frame 1
1. K-truppe fighting at Ecko Tower
2. The hostages seem to have been caught in the fighting and there are many casualties. 3. (left): Shoot everything that moves!

frame2
General: What is that?
General: That's what we get for forming coalitions for political reasons.

frame3:
Jovian: I agree with you about the lack of strategy.
Jovian: If you'd allowed our troops to take care of that, all of this would have been settled simply.

frame4
Venusian: Preposterous!
Venusian: If we'd let you do it, you would have made Mars a sea of dirt to serve as raw materials for the troposphere.

frame5
Someone: Learning that we would have to fight alongside our longtime rivals...

footnote: K-truppe: Commandos for Martian liberation, AKA the “extermination section”.


p07
frame1
General Yazuiji: But if the enemy's objective is to fan the embers of Mars…
General Yazuiji: Then we must rescue the hostages in the name of the Royal Council.
General Yazuiji: We're counting on you Zazie, GG!

frame2
Transmission: Zebra alpha team in contact with the enemy!
Transmission: Closing November-dome's exits

frame3
Transmission We've managed to separate the hostiles from the hostages.
Transmission Beta team, enter the dome! Proceed swiftly while securing hostages.

footnote: Zebra: special unit, under direct command of the Royal Council.

p09
frame 1
Zazie: Trevor!
Zazie: Kong!
Zazie: Mauer!
Zazie: Situation?

frame2
Soldier 1: Okay from my side.
Soldier 2: Here too.

p10
frame 4
Soldier 3: No sign of the enemy in the surroundings yet.

frame 5:
Kong: The Nazis could've launched their flying saucers at us, but they only sent robots. This no fun!
Zazie: This is no time to be taking things lightly, Kong.
Zazie: Beta team, situation report!

footnote: Nazi flying saucers: see GLO vol. 3 for details.


p11
Transmission: Here is beta team GG!
Transmission: The hostages are all safe. send us the Zanber support troops.

frame2
General Yazuiji: Well done!
General Yazuiji: We can engage Phase II.

frame3
Operator: Alpha team, go support the Q section of the Venusian Foreign Legion. (I use Foreign Legion here because it sounds like the French Foreign legion, and the Venusians have a French theme)

frame4
Transmission: What?! We're being asked to deal with Venus's laundry?
Transmission : Send us to Gespenst!
Zazie: Command center, please give us an acceptable explanation.

footnote: Venusian Foreign Legion: Venusian troops on Mars

p12
frame 1
Operator: Gespenst is now fighting with the K-truppe. The commander of the alliance is already asking for a section 886 action.
General Yazuiji: Stop your quarrelling!

frame2
General Yazuiji: This is our enemy's objective!
General Yazuiji: To demonstrate that the alliance is impossible, and expose their weakness to all.
General Yazuiji: We must at least show that we will not be fooled by that!!

frame3
Zazie: They've got a good strategist...

frame4
Transmission: All in all, the enemy that has decimated Q-truppe seems special.
Transmission: We do not even have any info, unknown enemy ... stay vigilant.
Zazie: Copy that.

footnote: Section 886: Jovian section on Mars.

p13
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p14
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p15
Transmission: A maintenance car on fire 2km ahead!
Transmission: No! Wait!

frame2
Transmission: There's someone on it!

p16
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p17
frame 1
Transmission: A woman!

p18
Transmission:I lost the drone!
Zazie: Enemy fire?

frame2
Soldier 3: No, the woman was not wearing any equipment and there wasn't any sound
Soldier 3: I’ll send... another drone immediately.

frame3
Transmission: We have visual.

frame4
Kong: I'm opening fire!
Soldier: Is she a civilian?

frame5
Soldier: What do we do, chief?

frame6
FIRE!

p19
frame 1
Soldier 3: No... we mustn't... shoot...

frame2
Soldier 3: WE MUSTN'T!
Soldier 3: You little ...

p20
frame 1
Soldier 3: Because she is...
Soldier 3: My angel...

frame2
Soldier 3: MAUEEER
p21
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p22-23
Text: An unforeseen situation!
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Re: GLO 87

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