Phase 89 is out!
You can grab it here:
http://www.raw-paradise.com/Ritual/Chapitres/Glo89.zip
So Zazzie's FB continues, the aftermath of the battle is the theme of this phase, but I really don't know, what's the essence of this phase, guess we gotta wait for the translation/summary.
GLO 89
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othergrunty
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Thanks a lot.
What! So early this month?
Damn, seems like we have to wait another month till we can see Gally's reaction to Zazie's story.
Anyway. First it seems that Erika didn't used a monecular wire ala Elf and Zwölf to attack Zazie's group, since the wire hanging around Zazie's knife, is far to thick for that. My guess it's some kind of heat wire. Basicly a wire which produces plasma around and so being able to cut through even monecular resistant material like the tonfas of Guntroll's cyborg monkey.
Also it seems like we were right about what Erika did to Zazie, with the frequence shock bouncing around her body producing random new ones.
Zazie herself seems to have a case of survivors guilt, together with the fear of hurting those who are close to her. Which is the reason she visits Gally. Also considering her comment in volume 11 when her vision begann to blur, i guess she either fears to or will die soon.
Funny looks like they used a water mattres in order to prevent Zazie from destroying the bed as a whole.
Intresting detail (thanks to the good quality of the raws), the female soldier in the hosptial tent, has a round bit on her neck, two clip like objects on the upper arm and seems to have a soft type hull, which reminds me a lot to the Fizziroy body. Which makes me wonder if she has a female type of it?
After all it would make sense to let one with such a body guard someone in Zazies condition, since this body type is extremly resistant against Herzer Hauens (See the super Thumb Fight in volume 10).
In the end i just want to see how Gally reacts next issue (and hopefully doesn't storms off towards Mars but finishes the damn ZOTT first) and wouldn't even have anything against next one being talky again as long as we get some more dialoge between Gally and Sechs.
What! So early this month?
Damn, seems like we have to wait another month till we can see Gally's reaction to Zazie's story.
Anyway. First it seems that Erika didn't used a monecular wire ala Elf and Zwölf to attack Zazie's group, since the wire hanging around Zazie's knife, is far to thick for that. My guess it's some kind of heat wire. Basicly a wire which produces plasma around and so being able to cut through even monecular resistant material like the tonfas of Guntroll's cyborg monkey.
Also it seems like we were right about what Erika did to Zazie, with the frequence shock bouncing around her body producing random new ones.
Zazie herself seems to have a case of survivors guilt, together with the fear of hurting those who are close to her. Which is the reason she visits Gally. Also considering her comment in volume 11 when her vision begann to blur, i guess she either fears to or will die soon.
Funny looks like they used a water mattres in order to prevent Zazie from destroying the bed as a whole.
Intresting detail (thanks to the good quality of the raws), the female soldier in the hosptial tent, has a round bit on her neck, two clip like objects on the upper arm and seems to have a soft type hull, which reminds me a lot to the Fizziroy body. Which makes me wonder if she has a female type of it?
After all it would make sense to let one with such a body guard someone in Zazies condition, since this body type is extremly resistant against Herzer Hauens (See the super Thumb Fight in volume 10).
In the end i just want to see how Gally reacts next issue (and hopefully doesn't storms off towards Mars but finishes the damn ZOTT first) and wouldn't even have anything against next one being talky again as long as we get some more dialoge between Gally and Sechs.
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Re: GLO 89
Many thanks, Ichigo and othergrunty.
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@Sergio?
As nice as it to be thanked by someone, but why do you thank me too? It's not as if i translated anything i just commented on how the situation looks to me.
By the way, looking more closely at Zazie's knife (on page 5) again, i beginn to belive that it's actualy a shoe lace, most likely from one of Zazie's comrades, which would make Erika just even more creepy.
As nice as it to be thanked by someone, but why do you thank me too? It's not as if i translated anything i just commented on how the situation looks to me.
By the way, looking more closely at Zazie's knife (on page 5) again, i beginn to belive that it's actualy a shoe lace, most likely from one of Zazie's comrades, which would make Erika just even more creepy.
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I apologize for my naïveté. I had understood you were commenting the chapter, as a reader fluent in the language would. So you mean it was just an interpretation?othergrunty wrote:@Sergio?
As nice as it to be thanked by someone, but why do you thank me too? It's not as if i translated anything i just commented on how the situation looks to me.
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Yeah, sorry for creating a wrong image, i can only speak german (my native language) and english and in both i have trouble with gramma and correct writing.Sergio wrote:So you mean it was just an interpretation?
So yes, i was just commenting what i see on the pages.
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well then you have shown great attention to detail, very impressive reading, you should be a detective
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Just to confirm that Erika is pretty scary, since she really used a Shoelace. On the previous chapter when Erika uses it as a garrote and Zazie blocks it with her knife, the bubble says "Shoelace!?". And in this chapter you can see clearly see the whole lace and both tips of it.
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Hey, Kamui04, have you really abandoned us?
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Interesting chapter and great care for details from othergrunty, I didnt noticed the water bed until reading your post. So Erika is basically using energy inside the body to either manipulate, kill the afflicted target itself or destroy everything it will come close to after the fight. Sound like the perfect terrorist technique, even if you don't kill the enemy you will still manage to instill fear in him and everyone around him. Another sign that the Panzer Kunst has a much darker side than Gally would think (and approve of).
Oh and about the wire, it would make sense to me that Erika use vibrations to vibrate the string and then make it cut through "anything". If the string is strong and thin enough and the vibrations are spread across all the string, I think it would be possible. Someone who actually know his wave physics correct me if I'm wrong.
edit: the string is shoelace??!.... wow! Is that even physically possible lol? Anyway I think it is safe to assume now that she did not used plasma.
Oh and about the wire, it would make sense to me that Erika use vibrations to vibrate the string and then make it cut through "anything". If the string is strong and thin enough and the vibrations are spread across all the string, I think it would be possible. Someone who actually know his wave physics correct me if I'm wrong.
edit: the string is shoelace??!.... wow! Is that even physically possible lol? Anyway I think it is safe to assume now that she did not used plasma.
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Anything can be a weapon, it just depends on the velocity you use it!! Remember for the High pressure Water used by Eelai!edit: the string is shoelace??!.... wow! Is that even physically possible lol? Anyway I think it is safe to assume now that she did not used plasma.
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The name of the mobile fortress, Alswider...
"Alswider (Scand.). ‘‘ All-swift’’, the name of the horse of the moon, in the Eddas."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edda
"Alswider (Scand.). ‘‘ All-swift’’, the name of the horse of the moon, in the Eddas."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edda
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^ Seems like Norse Mythology is a strong inspiration for the names of giant military vehicles in the Gunnmiverse. In chapter 21 there was the tank called Sleipnir (named after Odin's 8-legged horse).
This made me think of Wes Craven's cheesy 80's horror flick Deadly Friend where one character is decapitated with a basketball. You heard right; a basketball!Sam wrote:Anything can be a weapon, it just depends on the velocity you use it!! Remember for the High pressure Water used by Eelai!edit: the string is shoelace??!.... wow! Is that even physically possible lol? Anyway I think it is safe to assume now that she did not used plasma.
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Re: GLO 89
Thanks a lot!
can´t wait for some Translations, cause this chapter holds more information in the text then the Action
btw, i Really love Alswider, the Giant Battleshiplike Tank
maybe it can even swim...
that leads to a interesting Question... is there Actually an Ocean or some big lakes on Mars? in order to Terraform the planet it would be quite logical to melt the Ice on the Poles.... (just some offtopic thinking) ;D
can´t wait for some Translations, cause this chapter holds more information in the text then the Action
btw, i Really love Alswider, the Giant Battleshiplike Tank
maybe it can even swim... that leads to a interesting Question... is there Actually an Ocean or some big lakes on Mars? in order to Terraform the planet it would be quite logical to melt the Ice on the Poles.... (just some offtopic thinking) ;D
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Exterminanz: The latest research shows that Mars has ice under the surface.
http://www.universetoday.com/2009/01/20 ... orth-pole/
And it looks like the ice might have been liquid water for many many years ago. If you take a look at the surface, it looks like it has channels.
http://starchild.gsfc.nasa.gov/Images/S ... 1/mars.gif
http://www.universetoday.com/2009/01/20 ... orth-pole/
And it looks like the ice might have been liquid water for many many years ago. If you take a look at the surface, it looks like it has channels.
http://starchild.gsfc.nasa.gov/Images/S ... 1/mars.gif
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Re: GLO 89
thanks Crazyankan
but in order to not going too much offtopic, i´ll make a separated Thread about such discussions xD
but not today.. im dead tired and have to work tomorrow
but in order to not going too much offtopic, i´ll make a separated Thread about such discussions xD
but not today.. im dead tired and have to work tomorrow
Re: GLO 89
Nice chapter I suppose. Things go rather slowly these days but we get to learn a lot about Mars, ich is a good thing. Zazi seems kinda condemned at the moment, though. I hope she doesn't die too fast 
Re: GLO 89
Good call.
Now here's my attempt to "translate" the conversation bubbles of this chapter.
I'm not that good in both Japanese and English so meh.
But I think it will give you guys some quick BAALO fix while waiting for the proper
scanlation.
Panel sequence:upper right to lower left
Here we go.
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PAGE 1
Mars Kingdom Parliament
Basecamp
General:Operation Hagel ended successful...
General:But we suffered heavy losses
Specifically,more than 30 elites were destroyed by a single mysterious
soldier...Dubbed Frau.X.
General:Zazie,you are the only one who survived the contact with her
Operator:Frau.X left no material evidence
The voices in combat log were also Falsified into noises
Combat log:"You...you're a Kunstler!!"
"*Noises*"
Note:Frau.X,Deutsch .Ms. X.
PAGE 2
Operator:That shoelace is part of the Q Team's equipment ,no sign of extra processing
The section (of the knife) was destroyed at molecule level
How could this be possible...
Zazie:(We thought)It's an out-of-date martial art which was long-lost...
Its technique is no secret,its legend is exaggerated...
Zazie:Time for us to renew our knowledge about the Panzer Kunst
Zazie:We know nothing about the true power of the Panzer Kunst...
The reality is,we cannot counter it in close combat!!
PAGE 3
NULL
PAGE 4
GG:Haven't acknowledged the loss of your men yet?
Zazie:......Something still bothers me after all this
Zazie:She had hundreds of chances to kill me
In spite of the risk of leaking the information (about her),she still let me live...
GG:Well...Isn't that the bless from the god of war...
Don't think too much about it,Zazie
Zazie:"Obviously,she knows Gally"
"It seems I need to tell Gally about it"
PAGE 5
Zazie:Sound of Verschlag...!!
WTH...The battle was 3 days ago...Why now!?
GG:What...?
Zazie:No mistake...!!
"Where...!?"
Zazie:"Where it goes...!?"
PAGE 6
Zazie:"HERE!!"
GG:WAKE UP!!
You almost blow your head off!!
Page 7
Zazie:The Verschlag...If not...
Stop it...soon...
Zazie:"The booms..."
"My sense..."
Zazie:"It's paralyzing..."
PAGE 8
Female:Ah
Female:The captain is back!Doctor!!
Doctor:Can,can you hear me?
How do you feel?
Zazie:Nothing special
Zazie:"Waterbed?"
Page 9
Male:Hey,towel
Female:Thanks
Male:What did I say?
Captain Zazie sure has a charmed life!
Zazie:Robin,Canary(?)
Why are you so wet all over?
Zazie:What happened when I'm out?
PAGE 10
GG:A lot
Zazie:GG...What happened to your arm?
GG:A little accident happened when we carried you here
Verschlag...Actually I was dubious about it,once.Really a fearsome technique isn't it.
Zazie:The Verschlag can spread!?
Zazie:This waterbed is the countermeasure?
PAGE 11
The nature of Verschlag is some kind of solitary wave with certain frequency and fine tuned
vector
A single packet of such wave carries the energy equal to a small caliber handgun bullet,if
the wave resonate with the material it goes through,it can cause more damage than the
energy it carries.
Such solitary wave will not weaken as time pass and there are tens of thousands of such
waves repeatedly reflecting in my skull
The doctor said in one month, the waves will join together in a certain area and cause
explosive energy conversion,blowing my brain off and kill me
PAGE 12
At first the doctors tried to open the skull hoping it will release the (energy of)
Verschlag,then transplant the brain into another body.
But the Verschlag spread to the operator and caused casualty.Fail.
Then they planned to introduce solitary waves with reverse vector to neutralize them
But then they realized it will take several decades to calculate all the vectors.Fail
again.
The doctors gave up
Just like a booby-traped time bomb...More like a job for the bomb squad
As long as the explosion doesn't harm others,there won't be much problem
PAGE 13
Zazie:Thanks for the talk(?)
Zazie:To Her Majesty...
GG:We'll keep it a secret,don't worry
Male:Captain Zazie is suuuuuper cool
GG:However,techniques like "Dim Mak" are really exist...
Female:It's hard to believe
It's like been condemned death sentence,how could she still be so calm
Note:Dim Mak:Also known as "Death-in-three-years"(?),"Death Touch"。A legendary time delay
killing technique in Chinese martial art and karate.A kind of attack technique focus on
vital points(?).J.F.Gilbey witnessed a martial art master called Ao Shen yan(?) performed
it in Taiwan.The technique which Frau.X used has different mechanism.
PAGE 14
GG:Why didn't Frau.X kill Zazie quickly...
This is my interpretation...
GG:Didn't she want make our all-cool no-panic Zazie to taste the full terror of a ticking
death
and root out her pride with that "Dim Mak" like technique?
PAGE 15
Zazie:Damn,Troublesome
Soldiers:And to this contest
Zazie:"To the one who can kill tens of people with just one shoelace"
"Killing one soldier in the army will not be much of a trouble"(?)
PAGE 16
Soldiers:The loser will be that Frau.X!!
Zazie will not shake or collapse
PAGE 17
Zazie:"When think of death"
"I have no fear"
PAGE 18
Death is part of the job in the army
But
The regrets...
Now here's my attempt to "translate" the conversation bubbles of this chapter.
I'm not that good in both Japanese and English so meh.
But I think it will give you guys some quick BAALO fix while waiting for the proper
scanlation.
Panel sequence:upper right to lower left
Here we go.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
PAGE 1
Mars Kingdom Parliament
Basecamp
General:Operation Hagel ended successful...
General:But we suffered heavy losses
Specifically,more than 30 elites were destroyed by a single mysterious
soldier...Dubbed Frau.X.
General:Zazie,you are the only one who survived the contact with her
Operator:Frau.X left no material evidence
The voices in combat log were also Falsified into noises
Combat log:"You...you're a Kunstler!!"
"*Noises*"
Note:Frau.X,Deutsch .Ms. X.
PAGE 2
Operator:That shoelace is part of the Q Team's equipment ,no sign of extra processing
The section (of the knife) was destroyed at molecule level
How could this be possible...
Zazie:(We thought)It's an out-of-date martial art which was long-lost...
Its technique is no secret,its legend is exaggerated...
Zazie:Time for us to renew our knowledge about the Panzer Kunst
Zazie:We know nothing about the true power of the Panzer Kunst...
The reality is,we cannot counter it in close combat!!
PAGE 3
NULL
PAGE 4
GG:Haven't acknowledged the loss of your men yet?
Zazie:......Something still bothers me after all this
Zazie:She had hundreds of chances to kill me
In spite of the risk of leaking the information (about her),she still let me live...
GG:Well...Isn't that the bless from the god of war...
Don't think too much about it,Zazie
Zazie:"Obviously,she knows Gally"
"It seems I need to tell Gally about it"
PAGE 5
Zazie:Sound of Verschlag...!!
WTH...The battle was 3 days ago...Why now!?
GG:What...?
Zazie:No mistake...!!
"Where...!?"
Zazie:"Where it goes...!?"
PAGE 6
Zazie:"HERE!!"
GG:WAKE UP!!
You almost blow your head off!!
Page 7
Zazie:The Verschlag...If not...
Stop it...soon...
Zazie:"The booms..."
"My sense..."
Zazie:"It's paralyzing..."
PAGE 8
Female:Ah
Female:The captain is back!Doctor!!
Doctor:Can,can you hear me?
How do you feel?
Zazie:Nothing special
Zazie:"Waterbed?"
Page 9
Male:Hey,towel
Female:Thanks
Male:What did I say?
Captain Zazie sure has a charmed life!
Zazie:Robin,Canary(?)
Why are you so wet all over?
Zazie:What happened when I'm out?
PAGE 10
GG:A lot
Zazie:GG...What happened to your arm?
GG:A little accident happened when we carried you here
Verschlag...Actually I was dubious about it,once.Really a fearsome technique isn't it.
Zazie:The Verschlag can spread!?
Zazie:This waterbed is the countermeasure?
PAGE 11
The nature of Verschlag is some kind of solitary wave with certain frequency and fine tuned
vector
A single packet of such wave carries the energy equal to a small caliber handgun bullet,if
the wave resonate with the material it goes through,it can cause more damage than the
energy it carries.
Such solitary wave will not weaken as time pass and there are tens of thousands of such
waves repeatedly reflecting in my skull
The doctor said in one month, the waves will join together in a certain area and cause
explosive energy conversion,blowing my brain off and kill me
PAGE 12
At first the doctors tried to open the skull hoping it will release the (energy of)
Verschlag,then transplant the brain into another body.
But the Verschlag spread to the operator and caused casualty.Fail.
Then they planned to introduce solitary waves with reverse vector to neutralize them
But then they realized it will take several decades to calculate all the vectors.Fail
again.
The doctors gave up
Just like a booby-traped time bomb...More like a job for the bomb squad
As long as the explosion doesn't harm others,there won't be much problem
PAGE 13
Zazie:Thanks for the talk(?)
Zazie:To Her Majesty...
GG:We'll keep it a secret,don't worry
Male:Captain Zazie is suuuuuper cool
GG:However,techniques like "Dim Mak" are really exist...
Female:It's hard to believe
It's like been condemned death sentence,how could she still be so calm
Note:Dim Mak:Also known as "Death-in-three-years"(?),"Death Touch"。A legendary time delay
killing technique in Chinese martial art and karate.A kind of attack technique focus on
vital points(?).J.F.Gilbey witnessed a martial art master called Ao Shen yan(?) performed
it in Taiwan.The technique which Frau.X used has different mechanism.
PAGE 14
GG:Why didn't Frau.X kill Zazie quickly...
This is my interpretation...
GG:Didn't she want make our all-cool no-panic Zazie to taste the full terror of a ticking
death
and root out her pride with that "Dim Mak" like technique?
PAGE 15
Zazie:Damn,Troublesome
Soldiers:And to this contest
Zazie:"To the one who can kill tens of people with just one shoelace"
"Killing one soldier in the army will not be much of a trouble"(?)
PAGE 16
Soldiers:The loser will be that Frau.X!!
Zazie will not shake or collapse
PAGE 17
Zazie:"When think of death"
"I have no fear"
PAGE 18
Death is part of the job in the army
But
The regrets...
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Re: GLO 89
whoa.. thanks for your Scanslation... this clear things up a lot maybe Gally is able to annulate those Verschlag waves... she got a good Instinct with those Panzer Kunst techniques..
maybe Gally is able to annulate those Verschlag waves... she got a good Instinct with those Panzer Kunst techniques..-
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thank you so much. didn't expect to see a translation when coming today lol
anyway we still don't now how she cut with a shoelace
anyway we still don't now how she cut with a shoelace
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The big question is, should we wait for a translation for the previous chapters, or should we release phase 89 before them?
My vote goes for waiting...
My vote goes for waiting...
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WoW... Verschlag... I want one of those...
Excellent trans, You could trans the previous phases too... ¿why start for this phase?
Excellent trans, You could trans the previous phases too... ¿why start for this phase?
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Er...Thanks for the reply guys.
Well I just registered today and happened to have some oh-so-precious free time.
But I'd say again that it's not a proper "translation". I basically just rush through the lines and turn what I read in to English.No QC,no proofreading,so expect errors and funny sentences considering my not-so-good English and Japanese.But I'm confident the direction is largely correct though.
So I did some dig-up and found the English translation stopped at phase 82.I'll see what I can do next time I have some sufficient free time.
Well I just registered today and happened to have some oh-so-precious free time.
But I'd say again that it's not a proper "translation". I basically just rush through the lines and turn what I read in to English.No QC,no proofreading,so expect errors and funny sentences considering my not-so-good English and Japanese.But I'm confident the direction is largely correct though.
So I did some dig-up and found the English translation stopped at phase 82.I'll see what I can do next time I have some sufficient free time.