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How's the editing going?

I still got a few pages left, I'll finish up on Tuesday.
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I have cleaned it.
Can you post what you have done so far? You can post the rest later.

Should be nice if "another story" could be finished before next sunday.

And Jashin, can you make a star(*) before the meanings you have changed?
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crazyankan wrote: And Jashin, can you make a star(*) before the meanings you have changed?
I only made it more accurate, I don't think I've changed any meanings. If you mean accuracy, then it's pretty much everything.
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Here's my final p1-40, took longer than I thought :? The rest isn't all done, I'll finish on Thursday.




001
Caption: Kishiro Yukito presents his brand-new one-shot gaiden!
Koyomi: ... Emmm
Koyomi: Ouch...
Koyomi: Ah... Ah ah...
Koyomi: Master Den ... !?

002-003
Koyomi: Master Den is still alive

004
Caption: Den, who once led the Barjack and fought to the death with Gally, has risen once again ...... ?
Caption: The latest work in the "GUNNM GAIDEN" series, a 61-page one shot!!

005
Koyomi: Wait for me! Master Den ~ !!

006
Caption: 3 Days ago - Scrapyard Southern District, [ScrewHead Times] Newsroom
Chief Editor (CE): No good!!

007
Koyomi: How about this one ~
Koyomi: My timing here is impeccable!!
Caption: I'm Koyomi of Kansas, a 14 year old girl battling for survival in the Scrapyard (Translator's note: Kansas is Koyomi's father's bar from the original Gunnm arc)
CE: His whole face got cut off, face!!
Koyomi: Grrr ...
Koyomi: Don't forget
Koyomi: This exclusive story right here, it's all thanks to my hard work!!
Caption: [The astonishing Tower of Salem concept!! Kaos, the radio star returns miraculously and partners with power broker Vector to brave a great reform!!]
CE: And?
Koyomi: Then at least buy one of my photos...
Koyomi: Please, Chief Editor!! Ya ladykiller!!
EC: No means no!!

008
Koyomi: Cheap! Cheap!! Cheap bastard!!
CE: This is a place of business, we don't play childish games here!!
CE: If you want to survive in this profession ......
Koyomi: Ah~ In the end it's my nude pin-up you want, kinky old man!
Koyomi: You really want to see my naked body this much?
CE: I have zero interest in an underdeveloped little trollop!!
CE: Grrr, son of a
CE: She's past the age of reason ......
CE: Become a pro
Koyomi: Pro?

009
CE: To succeed in this world, be it man or woman, adult or child, rich or poor ......
CE: None of these things matter!
CE: The key is if you can become a pro or not!!
CE: Specifically, it's to be competent in any situation
CE: That's what a pro is!!
Koyomi: ......
Koyomi: I don't want to be a pro if you don't use my photos, kinky old man!!
CE: Who, who you calling kinky old man~

010
Tanaka: Big news, Chief Editor!!
Tanaka: The once dead "Den" has alleged risen again!!
CE & Koyomi: !?
CE: What!? This isn't a hoax is it, Tanaka kun!?
Tanaka: The word is, merchant caravans near the northern border have been attacked and wiped out.
Tanaka: According to the survivors, their attacker is a [gigantic steel samurai]!!
Tanaka: Here is a photo of a footprint left at the scene!!
CE: Ok!! "Demon King's Apparition Sighted!?" That'll be the headline of the front page story for the night edition!!

011
Koyomi: Pssh, I thought photography would be a breeze~
Koyomi: Master Den returning from the dead? It has to be a false rumor!!
I was there to witness Master Den's final stand!!

Koyomi: I'm gonna nab this exclusive and show the kinky old man what's what!!
Heeey! Taxi!!

012
Koyomi: I hate sunset
Koyomi: It fills the air with a somber mood......

Guy A: Excuse me, are you... Miss Koyomi?
Koyomi: Uh yeah... And you are?

Guy A: Hehe, I knew it'd be her
In the days of our defeat, we owe much to this photograph of yours for boasting our spirits.

013
Koyomi: Whoa! So nostalgic!
Were the two of you Barjack as well?!

Guy A: We were stationed at the western front~
Guy B: Please autograph it~

Koyomi: Haha~ It's tough being a celebrity~
Koyomi: Mister Buick sold these in secret...
Oh well... It's not such a bad thing

Koyomi: Oh.
That means you guys saw the news report on Master Den's resurrection too?

Guy B: We're not totally convinced either~
Especially since Miss Koyomi claims to have seen Lord Den's final moment...... So then......

Guy A: Hard to say
The Lord Den that was with Miss Koyomi might not be the actual one!?

Koyomi: ...Hum!
What did you say?! Trying to start an argument?

Guy A: N..no
It was only a theory, theory!

014
Guy A: In combat, Den was like that of a specter, his presence brought dread to all.
The fact is he once made consecutive appearances on two different battlefields several hundred kilometers apart. It's not likely a matter of speed.
From that point on a rumor started circulating...
that Master Den had a perfect double of himself!

Koyomi: Double......

Guy A: Another view was that Master Den's true form was itself a specter, or something like it...
Guy B: The gigantic samurai form was just a shell... and he was really immortal.

015
Koyomi: After Barjack's revolt, many things became a part of the past
Fury and Mister Buick both parted this world...
But if... Master Den is alive...

016-017
Koyomi: Once again......!

018
Koyomi: Aiee... What happened...?!

019
Koyomi: Ahh...aaaaaah!
Koyomi: Master Den!!!

020
Guy A: Long live Barjack~~!!
Guy B: The moment of Lord Den's return is finally here~~!!
Let's do battle side by side once again, Lord Den~~!!

021
Guy A: Wh... Why...

Koyomi: Master Den~~~ It's me! It's me Koyomi~~!!

Koyomi: Do..don't leav...
Koyomi: Take me...with you...

022
Koyomi: Oouuuu...
Koyomi: ...... What is this place...?
Old man: Ehh, you're finally awake

023
Old man: Lie there and don't move
Your head's fractured, move and your brain will go goro goro and leak out... hehehe!!

Koyomi: Waa it can't be!?
Old man: Hehe, kidding kidding!!
Old man: I'm making a pot of super nutritious soup, it's almost done, hehehe
Koyomi: Beurk...
Koyomi: Thanks for everything, ciao now!!
Koyomi: Euh... (So dizzy...)
Old man: Really... Where you headed in such a hurry, hehe
Koyomi: What a stinking shack, I can't stay here a second longer!!
Koyomi: Huh?

024
Doggy: Woof woof woof~
Koyomi: Wait...
Koyomi: No...
Koyomi: Noooo...
Koyomi: Rhaahaha
Old man: Don't want this camera no more, missy?
Koyomi: Ah! I forgot!
Koyomi: Aaaaah?!
Old man: It's damaged, I dismantled it for repairs... hehe

025
Geriperi: This is the superb "MTG MARK II" from Proximus Corp...
Geriperi: Fortunately I know of a pawnbroker...
Geriperi: But to find these rare parts will probably take some time, Hehe
Koyomi: .....
Geriperi: Hehe! Rest here and get well first
Geriperi: The one you're after hasn't appeared as of late anyhow
Koyomi: What!?
Geriperi: You're after [Den], no?
Geriperi: Tourists don't usually carry cameras of this kind.
Geriperi: Ooh, found ja! Found ja!
Geriperi: Little lady like yourself ought to do well with this kind
Geriperi: What do you say we trade? Hehe

026
Koyomi: Is this a joke?!
Koyomi thinking: Pretending to be sincere...
Koyomi thinking: only to go after the camera!!
Koyomi: That camera is an important keepsake of mine!!
Geriperi: MTG MARK II isn't necessarily the best choice for the little lady...
Geriperi: Let's have ourselves a photography contest!! Hehe!!

027
Koyomi: Awesome...
Geriperi: We start with something easy... Here, try practicing on my Chavez
Koyomi: So your name is Chavez?
Koyomi: Let me get a picture of your handsome face, Chavez~~~
Koyomi: Ahh, wait, don't move
Koyomi: Don't lick the lense~
Koyomi: Ugghahahaha
Caption: First day: total defeat

028
Caption: And so, I devoted myself to the daily photography contest against this odd old man called Geriperi
Geriperi: An opening!! Hehe
Koyomi: Damnit! You're distracting me on purpose!!
Geriperi: Such haste, what hope do you have of accomplishing great things? ~ Hehe!
Geriperi: Looks like I won again today! Hehe
Koyomi: Bastard~ Next time I definitely won't lose
Geriperi: That's the spirit... Hehe
Geriperi: But missy, what do you plan to do when you finally meet [Den]?

029
Koyomi: Get an exclusive of course!
Koyomi: And a photo op...
Koyomi: ...
Koyomi: .........
Koyomi: That time I completely forgot about the shot...
Koyomi: Master Den .....
Koyomoi: Wuhhuhh .....
Koyomi: I said an exclusive...
Koyomi: But the truth is... Whether I get one or not, it doesn't matter one bit.

030
Koyomi: I... don't know what to live for anymore...
Koyomi: Everything I hold dear... is gone!!!
Koyomi: There's no place left for me in the Scrapyard...
Koyomi: But if Master Den ... can tell me what I should do....!!
Koyomi: I want to see Master Den......
Koyomi: I want to see him...!!

031
Geriperi: This kid is in so much pain...
Geriperi: How would you reply to her
Geriperi: Oh Master Den

032
Caption: Ten days went by in the blink of an eye
Farmer woman: Thank you
Koyomi: What am I doing...
Koyomi: If you think about it, this "competition" is the old man's idea
Koyomi: and my wound has already healed
Koyomi: There won't be any news of Master Den if I keep this up
Koyomi: Ok! I've decided!
Koyomi: I'll leave as soon as the camera is returned!
Koyomi: I'll find someone else to do the repairs

033
Koyomi: Chavez
Koyomi: Mr. Geriperi...
Koyomi: ... and my camera!!
Eakins: ... uhh

034
Eakins: Ayeye ----
Eakins: The methods were a little brutish, please pay them no mind~
Eakins: Koyomi chan
Koyomi: Aren't you ... the honcho of this factory farm
Koyomi: There's no payoff in kidnapping someone like me!
Eakins: My name is Eakins
Eakins: Actually we have a lot to discuss with a renouned member of the Barjack such as yourself.
Eakins: Lights!

035
Caption: Master Den...!?
Koyomi: No... just an empty shell...
Eakins: As you can see, we're the ones who attacked the merchant fleet using this steel puppet.
PS Dude: No doubt, no doubt.
Farmer: For prosperity of the farm
Eakins: That floater Geriperi, knowing our secret, was blackmailing us so we had him purged!!

036
Eakins: 2 months ago we discovered what we think is an avatar of "Den"
Eakins: By using the image and the power of "Den", feared as the "Demon King of the Plains", any evil plans imaginable are now also achievable!! The attack on the merchant fleet was the first item on our agenda.
Eakins: The suprise attack went down without a hitch! ... However, something unexpected happened.
Eakins: Thinking that [Den] has risen from the beyond, groups of Barjack veterans have started to converge on this location
Eakins: As a result, we can no longer use this puppet freely... a total waste of a windfall
Koyomi: ... What the hell ......
Koyomi: A sham is all this is .....
Eakins: In the end, we've come up with a glorious plan to reverse this setback!!

037
Eakins: And that is the Barjack Revival Meeting to be held here at Farm 3, in 10 days!!
Eakins: To ensure its success we'll need your utmost support!!
Koyomi: A new.. Barjack.....!?
Eakins: Of course we don't aspire to do great things like trying to fall Tiphares.
Eakins: With the remaining Barjack forces, our real goal is to maximize the rate in which we accumulate wealth... Will you help us?
Koyomi: ... Alright
Koyomi: I'm help.

038
Caption: Posters for the Barjack Revival Meeting soon made their way across the wasteland
BV: We've waited forever for this day
BV: Heeey, I'm coming with you guys!!

039
Caption: Scrapyard, Vector building
Vector: Did you hear, Kaos?
Vector: The news of Barjack's revival?
Kaos: Not to worry. These imposters will slip up sooner or later.
Vector: Aren't we confident
Vector: But if the war is to return, then there's gonna be trouble...
Vector: The fact is the factories in town aren't functioning at full capacity, our defenses will be inoperable.
Vector: If news of the factories going haywire is to get out, then Scrapyard will collapse from within. (Translator's note: Refer to Gunnm:LO Vol.2 for more details)
Vector: Have you been in contact with Salem lately?
Kaos: It will be a bit longer.
Kaos: The world is on the verge of a monumental overhaul
Kaos: Therefore we must forestall any unnecessary conflicts, a peaceful resolution would be ideal......

040
Robot: Everyone's here today!
Robot: Let's have ourselves a new Barjack!
Koyomi: Master Den would never use the words "let's"
Robot: My...my bad~
Koyomi: Act more fierce!
Koyomi: Stop bowing your head!!
Koyomi: This script is terrible!
Koyomi: Can I change some stuff?
Eakins: Hehe I'll leave everything to you.
Eakins: After all we've never known the real Den...
Eakins: The decision to include this kid is the right one. Absolutely.
Farmer: She darn serious 'bout dis.
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good job.
but this comfuses me

dark4 translation
page 07
koyomi: really
koyomi: this one is really sharp

how could those two lines be changed to

Koyomi: How about this one ~
Koyomi: My timing here is impeccable!!

I know enough france to see that
vraiment
celle-l? est tr?s nette!!
sounds more like dark4 translation.

could it maybe be so that you are translating it from the japanese raws?
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I redid p39, so update your copy.

I use both Japanese and Chinese scans. If you look at the previous page, in her other shots there'd be motion blurs or something would get in the way because each time her timing is off.

The next time I post will be the final version and include all the pages, I'll mark those from the previous 40 if I make changes.
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That took a while. But now I am on page 40.
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Nice job.

I'm sick, got a bad cold somehow :? So tomorrow.
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I'll throw up the last 20 pgs tonight/tomorrow.

Thanks for not saying jack when I'm feeling awfully sick this whole week :evil:
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Ok, here is the long-awaited final version.

For pages 1-40: 5 asterisks ***** means some type of change or correction I made.

Translation's notes: please put those in the caption region

In the group credit/filename, please credit me as 1 ( Gunnm Gaiden - Bashaku Ando [1_Rippersanime] )

In the individual credit, please credit me as Jashin


That's it! I enjoyed translating Yukito's Gunnm very much, maybe in the future I'll do some LO translation :)

Happy lettering~

Jashin

-ps How can I look at the Vol.10 forum?




001
Caption: Kishiro Yukito presents his brand-new one-shot gaiden!
Koyomi: ... Emmm
Koyomi: Ouch...
Koyomi: Ah... Ah ah...
Koyomi: Master Den...!?

002-003
Koyomi: Master Den is still alive!!

004
Caption: Den, who once led the Barjack and fought to the death with Gally, has risen once again......?
Caption: The latest work in the "GUNNM GAIDEN" series, a 61-page one shot!!

005
Koyomi: Wait for me! Master Den ~ !!

006
-------3 days ago-------
Scrapyard Southern District
[ScrewHead Times] Newsroom

Chief Editor (CE): No good!!

007
Koyomi: How about this one ~
Koyomi: My timing here is impeccable!!
Caption: I'm Koyomi of Kansas, a 14 year old girl battling for survival in the Scrapyard (Translator's note: Kansas is Koyomi's father's bar from the original Gunnm arc) *****
CE: His whole face was cut off, face!! *****
Koyomi: Grrr...
Koyomi: Don't forget
Koyomi: This exclusive story right here, it's all thanks to my hard work!!
Caption: "The astonishing Tower of Salem concept!! Kaos, the radio star returns miraculously and partners with power broker Vector to brave a great reform!!"
CE: And?
Koyomi: Then at least buy one of my photos...
Koyomi: Please, Chief Editor!! Ya ladykiller!!
EC: No means no!!

008
Koyomi: Cheap! Cheap!! Cheap bastard!!
CE: This is a place of business, we don't play childish games here!!
CE: If you want to survive in this profession ......
Koyomi: Ah~ In the end it's my nude pin-up you want, kinky old man!
Koyomi: You really want to see my body this much?
CE: I have zero interest in an underdeveloped little trollop!!
CE: Grrr, son of a
CE: She's past the age of reason ......
CE: Become a pro
Koyomi: Pro?

009
CE: To succeed in this world, be it man or woman, adult or child, rich or poor ......
CE: None of those things matter! *****
CE: The key is whether or not you can be a pro!! *****
CE: Specifically, it's to be competent in any situation
CE: That's what a pro is!!
Koyomi: ......
Koyomi: I don't want to be a pro if you don't use my photos, kinky old man!!
CE: Who, who you calling kinky old man~

010
Tanaka: Big news, Chief Editor!!
Tanaka: The once dead "Den" has alleged risen again!!
CE & Koyomi: !?
CE: What!? This isn't a hoax is it, Tanaka san!? *****
Tanaka: The word is, merchant caravans near the northern border have been attacked and wiped out.
Tanaka: According to the survivors, their attacker is a "gigantic steel samurai"!!
Tanaka: Here is a photo of a footprint left at the scene!!
CE: Ok!! "Demon King's Apparition Sighted!?" That'll be the headline of the front page story for the night edition!!

011
Koyomi: Pssh, I thought photography would be a breeze~
Koyomi: Master Den returning from the dead? It has to be a false rumor!!
I was there to witness Master Den's final stand!!

Koyomi: I'm gonna nab this exclusive and show the kinky old man what's what!!
Koyomi: Heeey! Taxi!!

012
Koyomi: I hate sunset
Koyomi: It fills the air with a somber mood......

Guy A: Excuse me, are you... Miss Koyomi?
Koyomi: Uh yeah... And you are?

Guy A: Hehe, I knew it'd be her
In the days of our defeat, we owe much to this photograph of yours for boasting our spirits.

013
Koyomi: Whoa! So nostalgic!
Koyomi: Were the two of you Barjack as well?!

Guy A: We were stationed at the western front~
Guy B: Please autograph it~

Koyomi: Haha~ It's tough being a celebrity~
Koyomi: Mister Buick sold these in secret...
Oh well... It's not such a bad thing

Koyomi: Oh.
That means you guys saw the news report on Master Den's resurrection too?

Guy B: We're not totally convinced either~
Especially since Miss Koyomi claims to have seen Lord Den's final moment...... So then......

Guy A: Hard to say
The Lord Den that was with Miss Koyomi might not be the actual one!?

Koyomi: ...Hum!
What did you say?! Trying to start an argument?

Guy A: N..no, it was only a theory, theory!

014
Guy A: In combat, Lord Den was like that of a specter, his presence brought dread to all. *****
The fact is he once made consecutive appearances on two different battlefields several hundred kilometers apart. It's not likely a matter of speed.
From that point on a rumor started circulating...
that Master Den had a perfect double of himself!

Koyomi: Double......

Guy A: Another view was that Master Den's true form is itself a specter, or something like it... *****
Guy B: The gigantic samurai form is just a shell... and he is actually immortal. *****

015
Koyomi: After Barjack's revolt, many things became a part of the past
Fury and Mister Buick both parted this world...
But if...Master Den is alive...

016-017
Koyomi: Once again......!

018
Koyomi: Aieeaa... What happened...?!

019
Koyomi: Ahh...aaaaaah!
Koyomi: Master Den!!!

020
Guy A: Long live Barjack~~!!
Guy B: The moment of Lord Den's return is finally here~~!!
Let's do battle side by side once again, Lord Den~~!!

021
Guy A: Wh... Why...

Koyomi: Master Den~~~ It's me! It's me Koyomi~~!!

Koyomi: Do...don't leav...
Koyomi: Take me...with you...

022
Koyomi: Oouuuu...
Koyomi: ...... What is this place...?
Old man: Ehh, finally awake *****

023
Old man: Lie there and don't move
Your head's fractured, move and your brain will go goro goro and leak out... Hehehe!!

Koyomi: Waa it can't be!?
Old man: Hehe, kidding kidding!!
Old man: I'm making a pot of super nutritious soup, it's almost done, hehehe
Koyomi: Beurk...
Koyomi: Thanks for everything, ciao now!!
Koyomi: Euh... (So dizzy...)
Old man: Really... Where you headed in such a hurry, hehe
Koyomi: What a stinking shack, I can't stay here a second longer!!
Koyomi: Oooah?

024
Doggy: Woof woof woof~
Koyomi: Wait...
Koyomi: No...
Koyomi: Noooo...
Koyomi: Rhaahaha
Old man: Don't want this camera no more, missy?
Koyomi: Ah! I forgot!
Koyomi: Aaaaah?!
Old man: It's damaged, I dismantled it for repairs... hehe

025
Geriperi: This is the superb "MTG MARK II" from Proximus Corp...
Geriperi: Fortunately I know of a pawnbroker...
Geriperi: But to find these rare parts will probably take some time, Hehe
Koyomi: .....
Geriperi: Hehe! Rest here and get well first
Geriperi: The one you're after hasn't appeared as of late anyhow
Koyomi: What!?
Geriperi: You're after "Den," no?
Geriperi: Tourists don't usually carry cameras of this kind.
Geriperi: Ooh, found ja! Found ja!
Geriperi: A little lady like yourself ought to do well with this kind *****
Geriperi: What do you say we trade? Hehe

026
Koyomi: Is this a joke?!
Koyomi thinking: Pretending to be sincere...
Koyomi thinking: only to go after the camera!!
Koyomi: That camera is an important keepsake of mine!!
Geriperi: MTG MARK II isn't necessarily the best choice for the little lady...
Geriperi: Let's have ourselves a photography contest!! Hehe!!

027
Koyomi: Awesome...
Geriperi: We start with something easy... Here, try practicing on my Chavez
Koyomi: So your name is Chavez?
Koyomi: Let me get a picture of your handsome face, Chavez~~~
Koyomi: Ahh, wait, don't move
Koyomi: Don't lick the lense~
Koyomi: Ugghahahaha
Caption: Day 1 ends in total defeat... *****

028
Caption: And so, I devoted myself to the daily photography contest against this odd old man called Geriperi
Geriperi: An opening!! Hehe
Koyomi: Damnit! You're distracting me on purpose!!
Geriperi: Such haste, what hope do you have of accomplishing great things? ~ Hehe!
Geriperi: Looks like I won again today! Hehe
Koyomi: Bastard~ Next time I definitely won't lose
Geriperi: That's the spirit... Hehe
Geriperi: But missy, what do you plan to do when you finally meet "Den"?

029
Koyomi: Get an exclusive of course!
Koyomi: And a photo op...
Koyomi: ...
Koyomi: .........
Koyomi: That time I completely forgot about the shot...
Koyomi: Master Den .....
Koyomoi: Wuhhuhh .....
Koyomi: I said an exclusive...
Koyomi: But the truth is... Whether I get one or not, it doesn't matter one bit.

030
Koyomi: I...don't know what to live for anymore...
Koyomi: Everything I hold dear...is gone!!!
Koyomi: There's no place left for me in the Scrapyard...
Koyomi: But if Master Den...can tell me what I should do....!!
Koyomi: I want to see Master Den......
Koyomi: I want to see him...!!

031
Geriperi: This kid is in so much pain...
Geriperi: How would you reply to her
Geriperi: Oh Master Den

032
Caption: Ten days went by in the blink of an eye
Farmer woman: Thank you very much *****
Koyomi: What am I doing...
Koyomi: If you think about it, this "competition" is the old man's idea
Koyomi: and my wound has already healed
Koyomi: There won't be any news of Master Den if I keep this up
Koyomi: Ok! I've decided!
Koyomi: I'll leave as soon as the camera is returned!
Koyomi: I'll find someone else to do the repairs

033
Koyomi: Chavez!! *****
Koyomi: Mr. Geriperi...
Koyomi: ...and my camera!!
Eakins: ......uhh *****

034
Eakins: Aeyeye *****
Eakins: The methods were a little brutish, please pay them no mind~
Eakins: Koyomi chan
Koyomi: Aren't you ... the honcho of this factory farm
Koyomi: There's no payoff in kidnapping someone like me!
Eakins: My name is Eakins
Eakins: Actually we have a lot to discuss with a renouned member of the Barjack such as yourself.
Eakins: Lights!

035
Caption: Master Den...!?
Koyomi: No...just an empty shell...
Eakins: As you can see, we're the ones who attacked the merchant fleet using this steel puppet.
PS Dude: No doubt, no doubt.
Farmer: For prosperity of the farm
Eakins: That floater Geriperi knew our secret, he was blackmailing us so we had him purged!! *****

036
Eakins: 2 months ago we discovered what we think is an avatar of "Den"
Eakins: Burrowing the image and the power of "Den", feared as the "Demon King of the Plains", any evil plans imaginable are now also achievable!! The attack on the merchant fleet was the first item on our agenda.

*****
Eakins: The suprise attack went down without a hitch! However, something unexpected happened.
Eakins: Thinking that "Den" has risen from the beyond, groups of Barjack veterans have started to converge on this location
Eakins: As a result, we can no longer use this puppet freely... A total waste of a windfall! *****
Koyomi: ... What the hell ......
Koyomi: A sham is all this is .....
Eakins: In the end, we've come up with a glorious plan to reverse this setback!!

037
Eakins: And that is the Barjack Revival Meeting we're throwing here at Farm 3, in 10 days!! *****
Eakins: To ensure its success we'll need your utmost support!!
Koyomi: A new...Barjack.....!?
Eakins: Of course we don't aspire to do great things like trying to depose Salem. *****
Eakins: With the remaining Barjack forces, our real goal is to maximize the rate in which we accumulate wealth... Will you help us?
Koyomi: ... Alright
Koyomi: I'll help. *****

038
Caption: Posters for the Barjack Revival Meeting soon made their way across the wasteland
BV: We've waited forever for this day!! *****
BV: Heeey, I'm coming with you guys!!

039
Caption: Scrapyard, Vector building
Vector: Did you hear, Kaos?
Vector: The news of Barjack's revival?
Kaos: Not to worry! These imposters will slip up sooner or later!
Vector: Aren't we confident
Vector: But if war is to return, then there's gonna be trouble... *****
Vector: The fact is the factories in town aren't functioning at full capacity, our defenses will be inoperable.
Vector: If news of the factories going haywire is to get out, then Scrapyard will collapse from within. (Translator's note: Refer to Gunnm:LO Vol.2 for more details)
Vector: Have you been in contact with Salem lately?
Kaos: It will be a bit longer.
Kaos: The world is on the verge of a monumental overhaul
Kaos: Therefore we must forestall any unnecessary conflicts, a peaceful resolution would be ideal......

040
Robot: Everyone's here today!
Robot: Let's have ourselves a new Barjack!
Koyomi: Master Den would never use the words "let's"
Robot: My...my bad~
Koyomi: Act more fierce!
Koyomi: Stop bowing your head!!
Koyomi: This script is terrible!
Koyomi: Can I change some stuff?
Eakins: Hehe I'll leave everything to you.
Eakins: After all we've never met the real Den... *****
Eakins: The decision to include this kid is the right one. Absolutely.
Farmer: She darn serious 'bout dis.

041
Koyomi: I'm not against telling lies......
Koyomi: Though the lie has to be told masterfully...
Koyomi: If everyone perceives it as real......
Koyomi: Then the lie would then become the truth itself...
Koyomi: This is it! I'm gonna do it!
Koyomi: This'll work!

042
Caption: That's what I've been telling myself
Koyomi: Pfff...
Caption: I'm a liar and an imposter
Caption: What kind of person am I becoming
Chavez: Woof
Koyomi: Chavez!
Koyomi: You are safe
Koyomi: Huh... What's in the sack...?
Koyomi: Camera...
Koyomi: All fixed up.....!
Koyomi: "Keep the fee as my endorsement for your future breakthrough...."
Koyomi: "I'm away on urgent business, Chavez I leave in your care... -Geriperi"
Koyomi: Your master is pretty irresponsible.
Koyomi: My future breakthrough he says... I don't even know if I'll make it back to the Scrapyard.
Koyomi: What are you gonna do from now on?
Koyomi: Aaahahaha! You can stay with me!

044
Caption: Morning of the meet!

045
Eakins: My lord, this many.....!!
Eakins: Why are y'all so quiet...!?
Henchman 1: I'm ter......terrified, Mr. Eakins.
Henchman 2: If they find out about us... They'll gut us like animals
Eakins: Loo......looks like...the meet will have to be postponed...
Koyomi: Don't panick!! Show some poise
Koyomi: If you stop now, you'll have a riot on your hands!
Koyomi: Am I right, Mr. Eakins!?
Eakins: Ri...right! Koyomi san's got a point!!
Koyomi: Can't count on this guy after all...

046
Koyomi: It will be fine! Just stick to my script, everything will work out!!
Eakins: Have "Den" on stand-by!
Eakins: Power supply to the amps ok?
Eakins: Please Koyomi san, it's in your hands now!!
Koyomi: Leave it to me!!
Koyomi: This is so fun......
Koyomi: I could end up in total control over the wasteland as the shady mastermind behind Barjack.
Koyomi: Microphone is ready~
Koyomi: I'm on!!

047
Koyomi: Good morning~
Koyomi: How is everybody doing~~!?
Soldier: Koyomi
Soldier: It's Miss Koyomi
Koyomi: Though the world thinks we've surrendered to Salem

048-049
Koyomi: They are wrong!!
Koyomi: We are alive, and that means we have not lost the fight!!
Koyomi: So here's what you've been waiting for!!
Koyomi: Here we go.
Soldier: What is that!?
Soldier: What's going on?
Koyomi: ...!?

050-051
Koyomi: Two...Master Den!?

052
Eakins: What is happening
Eakins: This part's not in the script!?
Koyomi: Could...could this be the real Master Den...!?
Eakins: Take him down!!
Eakins: We'll take over as the last one standing!!
Puppet: Whoaaah!

053
Den: An opening!!
Den: Such haste,
Den: what hope do you have of accomplishing great things?
Koyomi: Huuh...
Caption: Isn't that something Mr. Geriperi spoke about...
Caption: Coincidence!?

054
Geriperi: Such a predicament~
Geriperi: Those rabbles have not only sullied your name with wanton mischief
Geriperi: They'd go so far as to assemble Barjack......It's time to make an appearance
Geriperi: Please, allow me to break the oath and assume your identity once again.
Geriperi: Master Den

055
Caption: Duty before welfare is the charge of the double (Translator's note: This is the code of the ninja)
Caption: Once the armor is donned, the mind and body must follow the will of the master!!

056
(Note to letterer: Please do not erase the kanji for the technique, put translation in caption)
Caption: Demon Buster

057
Caption: Penance!!

058
Eakins: Aaaaah
Eakins: This, this is the end!
Caption: It's done.
Cpation: Now comes the hard part
Caption: If you were standing here, Master Den
Caption: What would you say

059
Caption: to these misled soldiers?
Caption: and this confused girl?
Geriperi: The end to Salem's tyranny
Geriperi: will come by way of the hammer, not your guns
Geriperi: Go to Scrapyard, assist the construction of "Tower of Salem"
Geriperi: Dismissed!! `

060
Geriperi: Keep the fee as my endorsement for your future breakthrough....
Koyomi: Yea...
Koyomi: Got it
Caption: If there's nothing worth believing in
Caption: then believe in yourself
Caption: And if you can't even do that
Caption: Then the only thing left would be to find a trusty job

061
Caption: Perhaps the so-called pros
Caption: are those who have found a place to call their own

With the guidance of the vanishing figure, Koyomi took her first step towards a place she could call her own...

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Is there a link I can get the raws from?

The previous one isnt working.
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Jashin: Can you give me your email or msn please.
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I've been very busy. Check your pm.
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Its out.
Grab it from the bittorrent page or the manga page.
Thanks for translating Jashin!!!
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Hope everybody enjoyed it!


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YES!!! It's finally out!!! O thank you thank you thank you!!!
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FABULOUS!!! IT's sooooooo GOOD! Thanks so much!!!
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I have a question: What is the translation for Bashaku Ando?
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A name maybe?
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Int 29Ah wrote:A name maybe?
Remember, man: too vodka will destroy your brain! :twisted:
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Sergio wrote:
Int 29Ah wrote:A name maybe?
Remember, man: too vodka will destroy your brain! :twisted:
This post is out of place here, it doesn't derive from the topic. I really always thought that "Bashaku Ando" was a name of some guy that has given YK an idea/hint for that extra story.


PS.
I've been sober since 2nd of April (I was boarding a plane - I had to get drunk). Also, I don't drink much or frequently anyway. Moreover, I usually prefer beer over vodka.
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