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Gunnm: Another Story

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There is a new side story to Gunnm, hence the secondary title "Another Story". It revolves around the orphan kid and the giant samurai/half cyborg/ half house guy and its just been release on Dec 19th.

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http://ultra.shueisha.co.jp/UJ120/UJ120NextIssue.html

Is there any plans to translate this?
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I read about the chapter I wile ago.
I am going to take a look for it later this evening.

that chapter gonna be really awesome!
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Strange name of the chapter. "another story" is also the name of the gunnm CD.

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Why there's no "Gunnm Extra Story #2" is this because #1 is splitted into two parts?
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Why there's no "Gunnm Extra Story #2" is this because #1 is splitted into two parts?
Seems not. There is no way to find it?

And what about "Another story"? Can someone translate it? In text at least.
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We are going to translate it. But now our translators are working on vol 10 instead.
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Yeah, I imagine that Vol.10 takes more work to translate than "Another Story" since the latter is rather short. Plus, it doesn't really affect the main story, so there's no hurry to translate it...
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I originally offered to improve the quality of the LO translation, but in this case I can make an exception and translate this particular side story.

I've read it, it's gonna take some time, but I can do it.
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Post by romanus »

a great news : the another story has been scanlated by a french team (so in french !).

oops, the link :

http://shinjou.mangart.fr/Telechargement.html

here's a try of a transaltion of the first page :
sorry for the fauts !!!

page 1
caption : yukito kishiro presents his very last complete story
koyomi : oh...
aie...
koyomi : ah...
aah !
koyomi : master den...!?

page 2
koyomi : master den, you were alive
caption : den, who has before the commander of the barjack & who has fought a battle to death with gally, is he back ?...

page 3 :
wait !
master den !!!

page 4 :
caption :8 days earlier...
kuzutetsu, south area, editorial building of "nejiyama times"
editorial chief (EC) : unusable !!!

page 5 :
koyomi : really ?
but this one is very clear !
caption : I, koyomi of the Kansas, at 14 yo I survived by working in kuzutetsu !
EC : it miss a part of the head, doesn't it ?
koyomi :grrrrrr
ok
but if you had this scoop, it is thanks to me
caption : ambitius project of the buiding of the zaleem's tower ! kaos, the miraculously ressucity radio star , joins with the notable Vector and challenges the great reform
EC : and ...
koyomi : so... take me at least one picture...
koyomi : please, chief !!
good-looking man !
EC : no !no way !

page 6 :
koyomi : miserly! miserly! skinflint !
EC : we work here, we don't play !!
EC : if U want to work...
koyomi : so, do U ask me to pose nude, perverse ?
do U want to see my body ?
EC : I don't want to see a little girl !
oops, it's delicate, is she serious ?
EC : become a professional !
koyomi : pro ?

page 8 :
EC : in this world, whether one is a man or a woman, an adult or a child, whether one is relations or not...
we don't care !
EC : what it counts it is if you can work as a pro or not !!
EC : where that you would be, show your habilities without shame !
become a pro !!
koyomi : ...
koyomi : take me my pictures and I will be a pro, old pervert !
EC : who is an old pervert ?

page 9 :
tanaka : a great news, chief !!
it appears that the death-presumed den returns to the life !
EC & koyomi : !?!
EC : what !? is it not a lie, hein, tanaka ?
Tanaka : at the north border a caravan has been attacked & destroyed.
the survivors report that they have been attacked by "a warrior in giant armour"...!!
tanaka : here's the picture of a trace of foot left on the spot !!
EC : right !! "apparition of the demon" on the front page of tonight !!
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romanus Thank you! Keep it coming! =)

Can ask one of our proofreaders to take a look at it.

Then I can start editing it.
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hey I can do that, I'm from Quebec and I speak french on a daily basis :)
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001
Caption: Kishiro Yukito presents presents his latest complete story
Koyomi: ... OH
Koyomi: Ouch...
Koyomi: Ah...
Koyomi: Master Den... !?

002
Koyomi: Master Den, you were alive

003
Caption: Den, who once commandered Barjack and fought to the death with Gally, Is he Back?
Caption: The latest work in the series "GUNNM ANOTHER STORY", a one shot of 61 pages!!

004
Koyomi: Wait! Master Den!!

005
Caption: 3 Days earlier - Kuzutetsu South Zone, "Nejiyama Times" newsroom
Editorial Chief (EC): Useless!!

006
Koyomi: Really
Koyomi: This one is really sharp
Caption: Me, Koyomi from Kansas, at 14 years old I was surviving by working at Kuzutetsu
EC: The head is missing, no!!
Koyomi: Grrr
Koyomi: Ok
Koyomi: If you had that exclusive, it's thanks to me!!
Caption: "Zalem's Tower prestigious construction project! Kaos, the miraculously resurrected radio star, ally with notable Vector and brave the great reform!"
EC: And?
Koyomi: Well take at least one picture...
Koyomi: Come on boss!! Handsome!!
EC: No means no!!

007
Koyomi: Miser! Miser!! Grudger!!
EC: We are working here, we are not playing!!
EC: If you want to work.....
Koyomi: What, could the old pervert be asking me to pose nude!
Koyomi: You want to see my body?
EC: I don't want too see a washboard!!
EC: Ah but, it's delicate
EC: Is she at least nubile.....
EC: Go pro
Koyomi: Pro

008
EC: In this world, be it man, woman, adult or child, with or without relations.....
EC: It doesn't matter!
EC: What matters is if you can work as a pro or not!!
EC: Wherever you are, shamelessly display your abilities
EC: Become pro!!
Koyomi: .....
Koyomi: You take my pictures and I become pro, old pervert!!
EC: Who's an old pervert?

009
Tanaka: News, boss!!
Tanaka: It seems that "Den" whom we presumed dead, has returned!!
EC & Koyomi: !?
EC: What!? It ain't bullshit, right, Tanaka!?
Tanaka: At the north border, a caravan was attacked and destroyed.
Tanaka: The survivor said they were attacked by a "warrior in giant armor"
Tanaka: Here is the picture of a footprint left at the scene!!
EC: Ok!! "Demon's apparition!?" Front page of the night edition!!
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Post by romanus »

hey ! thanks dark4eons, my english is really not good !
but in spite of that, I've tried to go on this translation....
if dark4eons or s.o. else can proofread it, it would be great for english people !

so :



page 10 :
koyomi : well, it would be not too difficult to take a picture.
koyomi : master Den, returned from death ?
I'm sure it's bullshit !!
I saw with my own eyes the mster den's final moment !!

page 11 :
koyomi : with a such exclusive, I'll make change the old pervert's mind !!!
yep ! taxi !!

page 12 :
koyomi : I hate seeing the lying down sun...
it makes me sentimental...
a man : tell me, would not be you not the small koyomi?
koyomi : euh... I am. and you are ...?
a man : hehe !!! I had said it well to you!
this photograph often comforted us.

page 13 :
koyomi : ouah ! that made a long time !
you are old Barjack people !?
the 2 men : we were at the western front
please, gimme an autograph !
koyomi : ah, it's hard to be famous.
caption : mister buick made this kind of deal in hiding-place...
but it did nothing bad.
koyomi : no.
have U read the news of the Master Den's resurrection ?
a man : he couldn't remain quiet...
but koyomi, you saw well the true end of master den... didn't you ?
a man : hummmm.... or then the den with which she was was not the real one !?
koyomi : what ?!! do you want to fight ?
a man : N..no !! it was just a supposition !

page 14 :
a man : during the war, Den was dreaded with each appearance.
some even says that he was seeing on several front at the same time, moved away from several hundreds of kilmometers to kill the enemy
how could he do that ?
either it was a rumor, or den had perfect doubles !
koyomi : doubles ....
a man : another rumorwas that the real Den was just a shade...
the other man : his giant armour were just a misadventure... and he were immortal.

page 15 :
koyomi : since the barjack's revolt, I had only misfortunes.
Fury and mister Buick disappeared...
if... if den's alive...

page 16 :
caption : so...again...!!

page 17 :
koyomi :aie... but what the...?!

page 18 :
koyomi : ahh...aaaaaah !
master Den !!!

page 19 :
the 2 men : long live the Barjack !!
we were waiting all that time for your come-back, master den !!
let us fight side by side with Den !!

page 20 :
a man : wh... why ?...
koyomi : master Den, it's me !!!
koyomi !!!
I was... waiting...
I... together...

page 21 :
koyomi : aie...
where am I ?
so you returned to you.

page 22 :
a man : sleep quietly.
otherwise your cranium will explose and your brain too... hihihi
koyomi : seriously?
a man : na, I'm jocking !!
a man : wait a moment. I prepare a nutritive super soup. hihi
koyomi : beurk !
koyomi : thanks for all ! ciao !!
koyomi : euh...
a man : really, you are well stirring up.hihi
koyomi : a stink similar, I will not remain a second more in this hut !!!
huh ?..

page 23 :
koyomi : ouah !!!
but...
stop it !!
koyomi : stop it !
rhaaaaaaaa
a man : would not have you a camera ?
koyomi : ah !! yes I have !!
aaah?!!
a man : as it was broken, I dismounted it to repair it... hihi
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Thank you Dark and romanus. Keep it coming!

Let us finish another story this week. Shouldn?t be so hard to do.
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Translation done. I have started to editing it.
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Only proofreading left too do.
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Post by Jashin »

You proofread the translation after editing?

No offense to those who are responsible for the trans, but they're quite poor and could use some serious QA. If you post it here or send it to me I can do that.
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Post by Omicron91 »

Here's the next part proofread, some of it was a little tough so I can't 100% promise it's readability.


page 10 :
koyomi : Well, it wouldn't be too difficult to take a picture.
koyomi : Master Den, returned from the dead ?
It's bullshit!!
I saw Master Den's final moments!!

page 11 :
koyomi : With this exclusive, I'll make the old pervert change his mind!!!
Hey! Taxi!!

page 12 :
koyomi : I hate seeing the sunset...
It makes me so sentimental...

a man : Excuse me, would you happen to be the little koyomi?

koyomi : Uh... I am. and you are ...?

a man : Hehe!!! I thought it was you!
This photograph often brought me comfort.

page 13 :
koyomi : Whoa! That was so long ago!
You're old Barjack people !?

the 2 men : We were stationed at the western front.
Please, gimme an autograph !

koyomi : Ah, it's hard to be famous...

capton : Mister buick made this kind of deal in hiding-place... ********
but it did nothing bad.

koyomi : No.
Have you heard about Master Den's resurrection?

a man : He couldn't remain silent...
But koyomi, you saw the true end of Master Den... didn't you?

a man : hmmmm... or was the Den you saw die not the true one!?

koyomi : What?! You trying to start a fight old man?

a man : N..no!! I was just wondering aloud!

page 14 :

a man : During the war, Den's appearence brought dread to all.
Some even say that he was seen on several fronts at once, moving several hundreds of kilmometers at a time to strike at the enemy!
How is that possible?
Either it was a rumor, or Den had perfect doubles of himself!

koyomi : doubles...

a man : It was also said that the real Den was just a shade, a ghost...

the other man : His giant armour was just a deception... and he was really immortal.

page 15 :

koyomi : Since the barjack's revolt, I've had only misfortune.
Fury and mister Buick disappeared...
If... if Den's alive...

page 16 :
caption : So.. once again!!

page 17 :
koyomi :aie... but what the...?!

page 18 :
koyomi : ahh...aaaaaah!
Master Den!!!

page 19 :
the 2 men : Long live the Barjack!!
We were waiting all that time for your return, Master Den !!
Let us fight side by side with Den !!

page 20 :

a man : wh... why ?...

koyomi : Master Den, it's me !!!

koyomi !!!
I was... waiting...
I... together...

page 21 :
koyomi : aie...
Where am I ?
So you've returned...

page 22 :
a man : Sleep tight.
Otherwise your skull will explode and your brain will leak out... hihihi
koyomi : Seriously?
a man : Ha, I'm just joking !!
a man : Wait a moment. I made a nutritive super soup. hihi
koyomi : beurk !
koyomi : Thanks for everything! ciao !!
koyomi : euh...
a man : You really stir things up. hihi
koyomi : What an awful stink, I'm not staying in this hut a second longer!!!
Huh ?..

page 23 :
koyomi : ouah !!!
But...
Stop it !!
Koyomi : Stop it !
rhaaaaaaaa
a man : Didn't you have a camera?
koyomi : Ah !! Yes I did!!
aaah?!!
a man : It was broken, so I dismounted it to repair it... hihi
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Post by romanus »

Jashin wrote:You proofread the translation after editing?

No offense to those who are responsible for the trans, but they're quite poor and could use some serious QA. If you post it here or send it to me I can do that.
what's a serious QA ?

I read the translation of omicron91, and this one is well better than mine.
I agree with all the arrangement between our 2 translation. thx !

I go on the translation, no doubt I made a lot of faults, but I just try...

page 24 to 36 :

page 24 :
geriperi (the name of the man) : one of these famus "MTG Mark II" by proximus...
I saw some in the shop of rejects of a friend...
the parts are rare, that can take time, hihi
koyomi : ...
geriperi : but don't despair !
those who you seek will not leave before a long time, be quiet
geriperi : you're looking for den, aren't you ?
it's not really an amateur camera...
koyomi : Hein !?!
geriperi : oohhh here it was !
geriperi : but this camera doesn't fit you
don't you want to change with this one ? hihi

page 25 :
koyomi : are you joking ?
(thinking) it seems you're interested in
(thinking) you wanted my camera !!
this camera is very important to me !!
geriperi : well, but are you worthy of a MTG MARK II ?...
a contest of photography against me !! hihi

page 26 :
koyomi : oups ....
geriperi : it's without doubt too difficult for you...
first try to shoot chavez.
koyomi : your name is also chavez...
I'm going to take a great picture of you, chavez
koyomi : hu ! don't move !!
koyomi : don't lick it !!
rhaaaa
caption : first day, total defeat...

page 27 :
caption : then I accept the picture daily contest against this strange old man... geriperi
geriperi : you're too relax !! hihi
koyomi : shut up, it deconcentrates me !!!
geriperi : in these conditions, you will fail.
geriperi : today it's still me who wins !!
koyomi : shit, you'll see....
geriperi : here's well said...
but tell me.... what will you do if you re-find "den" ?

page 28 :
koyomi : it's obvious ! it will be a scoop !
to take pitures of him...
...
...
(thinking) : this time I've totally forgotten to take a picture....
master den....
koyomi :snif...
f.. for a scoop...
in fact... how could I make it ?...

page 29 :
koyomi : I... I don't know anymore how I have to live now...
I don't believe anymore in anything..!!
I don't have a hom in kuzutetsu...
but with master den... how could I react?.. tell me how...!!
I want to meet master den...
I want to meet him...!!

page 30 :
geriperi : she has real problems...
how could I answer her ?...
master den.

page 31 :
thus more than 10 days spent
the woman : as usual...
koyomi : and if i eat one...
if one thinks of it, the contest of photograph is right a swindle
and I haven't bandages any more
if I stay here, I wouldn't have any news about master Den.
right, let's go !!
he has to give me back my camera now
another people could repair it.

page 32 :
koyomi : chavez !
geriperi !
... and my camera !!??
... pfff

page 33 :
eakins : well, well
sorry for these violent way,
koyomi.
koyomi : you... aren't you the master of the farm ?...
if you kidnap me, noone give you a reward for me !...
eakins : my name's eakins
I hope you coming, you, the Barjack's idol.
light on !

page 34 :
koyomi : Master... Den ..!?
no, just aa empty shell...
eakins : as you can see, that's us who attacked the caravan with this robot.
this vagrant geriperi blackmail us, by threatening us all to reveal, then we made him disappear!!!

page 35 :
eakins : 2 month ago, we discovered what we consider a replica of "den"
by using the appearance and the force of "Den", feared as "the demon of the moor", all the misdeeds became possible !! firstly, we attacked with the cargo of the caravan
the strategy of plundering in itself was a total success, but, unforeseen events appear...
all the Barjack's veteran who have learnt the den's resurrection have gathered...
we can't use this armour like that any more... as it left, it's a fine mess...
koyomi : ....thus...
it was just a lie...
eakins : but every cloud has a silver lining, we worked out a plan which will make date !!

page 36 :
eakins : in 10 days, we will reform a new Barjack at the farm 3 !
and to make it more real, we would like that you support us !!!
koyomi : a new... Barjack ?...
eakins : of course, we don't think about great ambition like destroying zalem,
but by using the force of the Barjack's veteran, we want to pile up a comfortable fortune
do you join us ?
koyomi : ... all right
I'm with you.
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Post by Jashin »

QA is quality assurance.

Look, I said no offense, but some of the trans are not good English and some are not accurate. I'm just saying I'll help.
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Post by romanus »

no pb ! I don't feel any offenses against me !
I'm french, and I don't speak very well english, that's why I'm glad that people proofread what I post. I just want to give you some help.
for exemple, for some word I don't know, I use a translator and we all know that it isn't very accurate...
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Post by Jashin »

p1-22 is done

Few things: Another Story is not the title of this 1-shot, it's engrish for the word gaiden, or spinoff series. I've corrected this in the trans. The real subtitle is Bashaku Ando.




001
Caption: Kishiro Yukito presents his brand-new one-shot gaiden!
Koyomi: ... Emmm
Koyomi: Ouch...
Koyomi: Ah... Ah ah...
Koyomi: Master Den ... !?

002
Koyomi: Master Den is still alive

003
Caption: Den, who once led the Barjack and fought to the death with Gally, has risen once again ...... ?
Caption: The latest work in the "GUNNM GAIDEN" series, a 61-page one shot!!

004
Koyomi: Wait for me! Master Den ~ !!

005
Caption: 3 Days ago - Scrapyard Southern District, [ScrewHead Times] Newsroom
Chief Editor (CE): No good!!

006
Koyomi: How about this one ~
Koyomi: My timing here is impeccable!!
Caption: I'm Koyomi of Kansas, a 14 year old girl battling hard to survive the Scrapyard * (Translator's Note: Kansas is Koyomi's father's bar from the original Gunnm arc)
CE: His head is missing, head!!
Koyomi: Grrr ...
Koyomi: Don't forget
Koyomi: This exclusive story right here, it's all thanks to my hard work!!
Caption: [The astonishing Tower of Salem concept!! Kaos, the radio star recovers miraculously and partners with power broker Vector to brave a great reform!!]
CE: And?
Koyomi: Then at least take one of my photos...
Koyomi: Please, Chief Editor!! You ladykiller!!
EC: No means no!!

007
Koyomi: Cheap! Cheap!! Cheap bastard!!
CE: This is a place of business, we don't play childish games here!!
CE: If you want to survive in this profession ......
Koyomi: Ah~ In the end it's my nude pin-up you want, kinky old man!
Koyomi: You really want to see my naked body this much?
CE: I have zero interest in an underdeveloped little trollop!!
CE: Grrr, son of a
CE: She's past the age of reason ......
CE: Become a pro
Koyomi: Pro?

008
CE: To succeed in this world, be it man or woman, adult or child, rich or poor ......
CE: None of these things matter!
CE: The key is if you can become a pro or not!!
CE: Specifically, it's to be competent in any situation
CE: That's what a pro is!!
Koyomi: ......
Koyomi: I don't want to be any pro if you don't use my photos, kinky old man!!
CE: Who, who you calling kinky old man~

009
Tanaka: Big news, Chief Editor!!
Tanaka: The once dead "Den" has alleged risen again!!
CE & Koyomi: !?
CE: What!? This isn't a hoax is it, Tanaka!?
Tanaka: The word is, merchant caravans near the northern border have been attacked and wiped out.
Tanaka: According to the survivors, their attacker is a [gigantic steel samurai]!!
Tanaka: Here is a photo of a footprint left at the scene!!
CE: Ok!! "Demon Lord's Apparition Sighted!?" That'll be the headline of the front page story for the night edition!!

010
Koyomi: Pssh, I thought photography would be a breeze~
Koyomi: Master Den returning from the dead? It has to be a false rumor!!
I was there to witness Master Den's final stand!!

Koyomi: I'm gonna nab this exclusive and show the kinky old man what's what!!
Heeey! Taxi!!

011
Koyomi: I hate sunset
Koyomi: It fills the air with a somber mood......

Guy A: Excuse me, would you happen to be Miss Koyomi?
Koyomi: Uh yes... And you are?

Guy A: Hehe, I knew it'd be her
On a bad day this photograph of yours would often bring us comfort.

012
Koyomi: Whoa! So nostalgic!
Were the two of you Barjack as well?!

Guy A: We were stationed at the western front~
Guy B: Please autograph it~

Koyomi: Haha~ It's tough being famous~
Koyomi: Mister Buick sold these in secret...
Oh well... It's not such a bad thing

Koyomi: Oh.
That means you guys saw the news report on Master Den's resurrection too?

Guy B: We're not totally convinced either~
Especially since Miss Koyomi claims to have seen Lord Den's final moment...... So then......

Guy A: Hard to say
The Lord Den that was with Miss Koyomi might not be the actual one!?

Koyomi: ...Hmmm
What?! Trying to start an argument?

Guy A: N..no
It was only a theory, theory!

013
Guy A: During battle, Den's demeanor was like that of a specter, it brought dread to all.
The fact is he once made consecutive appearances on two different battlefields several hundred kilometers apart. It's not likely a matter of speed.
Hence from that point on a rumor started circulating...
that Master Den had a perfect double of himself!

Koyomi: Double......

Guy A: Another view was that Master Den's true form was itself a specter, or something like it...
Guy B: The gigantic samurai form was just a shell... and he was really immortal.

014
Koyomi: After Barjack's revolt, important things of the past have all but disappeared
Fury and Mister Buick have also parted this world...
But if... Master Den is alive...

015
Koyomi: Once again......!

016
Koyomi: Aiee... What happened...?!

017
Koyomi: Ahh...aaaaaah!
Koyomi: Master Den!!!

018
Guy A: Long live Barjack~~!!
Guy B: The moment of Lord Den's return that we're waited so long for has finally arrived~~!!
Let's do battle side by side once again, Lord Den~~!!

019
Guy A: Wh... Why...

Koyomi: Master Den~~~ It's me! It's me Koyomi~~!!

Koyomi: Do..don't leav...
Koyomi: Take me...with you...

020
Koyomi: Oouuuu...
Koyomi: ...... What is this place...?
Old man: Ehh, you're finally awake

021
Old man: Lie there and don't move
Your head's fractured, move and your brain will go goro goro and leak out... hehehe!!

Koyomi: Waa it can't be!?
Old man: Hehe, kidding kidding!!
Old man: I'm making a pot of super nutrition soup, it's almost done, hehehe
Koyomi: Beurk...
Koyomi: Thanks for everything, ciao now!!
Koyomi: Euh... (So dizzy...)
Old man: Really... Where you headed in such a hurry, hehe
Koyomi: What a stinking shack, I can't stay here a second longer!!
Koyomi: Huh?

022
Doggy: Woof woof woof~
Koyomi: Wait...
Koyomi: No...
Koyomi: Noooo...
Koyomi: Rhaahaha
Old man: Don't want your camera anymore, missy?
Koyomi: Ah! I forgot!
Koyomi: Aaaaah?!
Old man: It's broken, I dismantled it for repairs... hehe
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025
Geriperi: One of the famous "MTG MARK II" from Proximus...
Geriperi: I saw some in the chop shop of a friend...
Geriperi: The parts are rare, it may take some time, Hehe
Koyomi: .....
Geriperi: But nooo! Cheer-up
Geriperi: Calm down, the ones you're looking for won't leave for a while
Koyomi: Huh!?
Geriperi: You're looking for "Den" right?
Geriperi: It's not really tourist's equipment.
Geriperi: Ooh, there it is!
Geriperi: But this camera isn't for you.
Geriperi: Would you like to trade it for thise one? Hehe

026
Koyomi: You are kidding!!
Koyomi: You look like you're holding to it...
Koyomi: But you want my camera!!
Koyomi: This camera is really important to me!!
Geriperi: Ok, but are you worthy of a MTG MARK II
Geriperi: A picture contest agains't me!! Hehe!!

027
Koyomi: Oh shit...
Geriperi: It is probably too hard for you... Try to take a picture of Chavez already
Koyomi: You're calle called Chavez
Koyomi: I'm going to take a beautiful picture, Chavez
Koyomi: Ah, hey, don't move
Koyomi: Don't lick the lense
Koyomi: Ugggh
Caption: First day, total defeat

028
Caption: After, I tossed myself into a daily picture contest agains't this strange old man... Geriperi
Geriperi: You're too relaxed!! Hehe.
Koyomi: Shut up, it's distracting me!!
Geriperi: Under those circumstances, nothing will get done. Hehe!
Geriperi: It's me who win again today! Hehe
Koyomi: Shit, you'll see.
Geriperi: Well said...
Geriperi: But... tell me, what will you do if you find "Den"?

029
Koyomi: It's obvious! Taking his picture
Koyomi: It'll be a scoop...
Koyomi: ...
Koyomi: .........
Koyomi: The last time I totally forgoty to take a picture...
Koyomi: Master Den .....
Koyomoi: Sniff .....
Koyomi: F... For a scoop...
Koyomi: In fact I don't know how I should do it...

030
Koyomi: I... don't know how I should live anymore...
Koyomi: I don't think I have faith in anything anymore..!!
Koyomi: There's no home for me in Scrapyard city...
Koyomi: But with Master Den... Tell me how should I do it....!!
Koyomi: I want to meet Master Den...
Koyomi: I want to meet him....!!

031
Geriperi: She has real worries...
Geriperi: How to answer her
Geriperi: Master Den.

032
Caption: And so, 10 days went on
Farmer woman: Like always
Koyomi: And if I ate one...
Koyomi: If you think about it, the picture contest is only a scam
Koyomi: And we removed my bandages...
Koyomi: And if I stay here, I won't find any new info on Master Den
Koyomi: Ok it's decided!
Koyomi: He's going to have to return my camera.
Koyomi: Others could fix it.

033
Koyomi: Chavez
Koyomi: geriper...
Koyomi: ... and my camera!!
Eakins: ... pff

034
Eakins: Well, well.
Eakins: Sorry for those violent methods
Eakins: Koyomi.
Koyomi: You... wouldn't be the master of the farm...
Koyomi: If you kidnapped me, no one will pay a ransom for me
Eakins: My name is Eakins.
Eakins: I was hoping that you'd come, you the star of Barjack.
Eakins: Lights!

035
Caption: Master Den...!?
Koyomi: No... just an empty shell
Eakins: Like you can see, it's us who attacked the the caravan with this robot.
PS Dude: Yeah.
Farmer Dude: Countryside uprising
Eakins: Geriperi, that floater, was blackmailing us so we made him disappear!!

036
Eakins: 2 months ago we discovered what we think is an avatar of "Den"
Eakins: By using the look and the power of "Den", feared as the "Demon of the Heath", any wrongdoing became achievable!! To start we decided to strike on the freight of the caravan.
Eakins: The looting strategy in itself was a total success!... but... the unexpected happened
Eakins: Having learned of the true "Den" resurrection, some troups of Barjack veterans bonded together
Eakins: So we can't use the armor lightly anymore... It's a fine mess.
Koyomi: ... What ......
Koyomi: It was just lies.....
Eakins: But every cloud has a silver lining, we developed a milestone plan!!

037
Eakins: IN 10 days, we will re-form a new Barjack at Farm 3
Eakins: And to make it more realistic we want you to support us!!
Koyomi: A new Barjack.....!?
Eakins: Of course we don't think of great stuff like destroying Tiphares.
Eakins: By using the strength of Barjack veterans we plan on gathering a cozy fortune... are you with us?
Koyomi: ... Ok
Koyomi: I'm with you.

038
Caption: Brochures telling of the constitution of a new Barjack were flying all over the wasteland
On the brochure: 15 august New Barjack Again
BV: We were waiting this for so long
BV: I'm joining you

039
Caption: Scrapyard city, Vector building.
Vector: Are you aware, Kaos?
Vector: Barjack is re-forming?
Kaos: No problem? If it's a fake it'll betray itself!!
Vector: You seem so confident.
Vector: But, it would be annoying if there was another war...
Vector: Due to the factory inactivity, the defensive troups doesn't step in
Vector: If the innefficiency of the Factory law was discovered, Scrapyard city would disintigrate from the inside.
Vector: Could you reach your contact at Tiphares?
Kaos: It is necessary to wait a bit more
Kaos: This world is on the verge great changes.
Kaos: Avert useless troubles, it would be better to do a smooth landing...

040
Robot: You are all together!
Robot: W're going to revive Barjack
Koyomi: Master Den would never say "w're"
Robot: 'm sorry.
Koyomi: Act more dignified!
Koyomi: Stop scratching your head!!
Koyomi: That speech is strange!
Koyomi: Can I correct it?
Eakins: Yes yes go ahead.
Eakins: After all we don't know this Den...
Eakins: It's great to have one of his friends with us!

041
Koyomi: A fake, not really in fact...
Koyomi: A fake is something different from the real one
Koyomi: But if everyone believe it's real
Koyomi: Then even a fake can become real...
Koyomi: There! It's all right!
Koyomi: No more troubles!!

042
Caption: That's what I was telling myself
Koyomi: Pfff...
Caption: I was lying to myself
Caption: Maybe
Caption: To become an adult.
Chavez: Woof
Koyomi: Chavez!
Koyomi: You are safe and sound. You.
Koyomi: Hmm... This package...?
Koyomi: My camera...
Koyomi: Totally fixed.....!
Koyomi: "Pay me once you will have succeeded"...
Koyomi: "I need to go for business, take care of Chavez... Geriperi"...
Koyomi: Your master is irresponsible.
Koyomi: When I will have succeeded...
Koyomi: I won't be able to go back to Scrapyard city maybe.
Koyomi: What do you think will happen of me?
Koyomi: Baaaaah! Since you are here, I don't mind!
Pay me once you will have succeeded
044
Caption: Early on the day of the great gathering

045
Eakins: So many.....!!
Eakins: And why is it so quiet...!?
Henchman 1: I'm scared, Eakins.
Henchman 2: If they figure it out... They'll kill us on the spot!!
Eakins: You... You think so... We can postpone the gathering... then...
Koyomi: Don't be crybabies!! Show some nerve
Koyomi: If you stop now, you'll have a riot on your hands!
Koyomi: No Eakins!?
Eakins: It's... It's true! Koyomi is right!!
Koyomi: They're unbelievable...

046
Koyomi: It will be ok! If you follow my scenario, everything will be alright!!
Eakins: Switch "Den" to stand-by!
Eakins: Are the amps ok?
Eakins: I beg you Koyomi, we're counting on you!!
Koyomi: I'm taking care of everything!!
Koyomi: They're pathetic...
Koyomi: I might as well reign over the wasteland from the shadows after all
???: The microphone is connected.
???: Good!!

047
Koyomi: Hi.
Koyomi: How are you doing everyone?
Barjack soldier(BS): Koyomi.
BS: Little Koyomi.]
Koyomi: Everyone thought Tiphares defeated us, but...

048-049
Koyomi: it was wrong!!
Koyomi: We lived here, but
Koyomi: As long as we stay alive we are not defeated!!
Koyomi: And even him!!
Koyomi: Here we go.
BS: What is that there!?
BS: What does that mean?
Koyomi: ...!?

050-051
Koyomi: There is two "Master Den"!?

052
Eakins: What is happening.
Eakins: This is not in the scenario!?
Koyomi: It... would be the real Den...!?
Eakins: Destroy him!!
Eakins: The victor will be the real one!!
Eakins: Whoaaa

053
Den: You're too relaxed!!
Den: Under the circumstances.
Den: Nothing will get done!!
Koyomi: Eh...
Caption: Those words are Geriperi's...
Caption: Is it luck...!?

054
Geriperi: I am worried.
Geriperi: They assume your name and they also allow themselves to commit wrongdoings.
Geriperi: We can't leave unchecked this... resurrection of Barjack
Geriperi: Allow me to break the taboo and assume your identity again.
Geriperi: Master Den.

055
Caption: Dying by loyalty, to erase himself so are the duties of the men of the shadows
Caption: Once the armor assumed, his mind and body are solely dedicated to the master!!

056
Caption: The stream of the nine devils fights in armor
Caption: Strike down the devil

057
Caption: Punishment!!

058
Eakins: Aaah
Eakins: It's the end.
Caption: It's just,
Cpation: That I'm really bothered.
Caption: If you are Master Den.
Caption: Then who am I.

059
Caption: Those exploited soldiers?
Caption: That stupid brat?
Geriperi: The end of Tiphares rule,
Geriperi: Won't be caused by the gun but by the hammer.
Geriperi: Let's go to Scrapyard city and build anew the "Tiphares Tower"
Geriperi: Break!!

060
Geriperi: Pay me once you will have succeeded.
Koyomi: .....Ok
Koyomi: Agreed
Caption: Everyone believe in something
Caption: Even if it's only in himself.
Caption: We can't believe in someone pitiful
Caption: That's why we need to find a work to be belivable.

061
Caption: That's what being a pro is about.
Caption: By letting herself be led, Koyomi took the first step. Towards a place she could call home...
Caption: Someone who found a place where to live.
The end

//Dark4eons

this was posted on the private forum part. Jashin and Omicron91, something you like to change?
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I'll look over it.
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