GLO 108 translation WIP

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ashod
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GLO 108 translation WIP

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Hey guys, slowly doing this whenever I get some free time.
Here are the first 5 pages. Enjoy, and those who are good at Japanese, make some propositions/corrections wherever you feel there's a need. Bon appétit les amis! =)



P1
Zekka enters in the « Dragon Slayer Punch » combination.

P2
A feint low kick
Aiming for Don Fua’s knee joint

P3
Although it’s just a feint, it’s powerful enough for an instant kill

P4
Don Fua blocks it using a knee guard combined with super electromagnetic defense.

Don Fua could have avoided the attack by dematerializing like he did against Gally’s slashing attack but

He had to receive the complete combination from Zekka for the “Dragon Slayer Punch” to be complete.

Plus, there was something he could understand only by being in full contact.
Don Fuan: “Is this…delight!?”

P5
Don Fua: “There’s no hate, nor rage or any sadness in his technique”
“What there is, is only innocent joy”
“As if he was a child having so much fun walking on his own feet…”
“It could be misunderstood as a technique to slaughter everything”
“But all you want is to express your existence to its maximum”
“Zekka, my dear rival”
“I was always jealous of your talent”
“Envious of your simplicity in explaining everything based on “man’s romance””
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Re: GLO 108 translation WIP

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sounds epic !
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TargaryenX
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Re: GLO 108 translation WIP

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Not bad ash. Sorry, I had been putting it off because of some annoying metaphyscial bullshit in the middle. Nothing motivates me like someone else threatening to do my job for me though!
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