1. Olympe is asking Pissarro to interfer. She is NOT asking directly the opponent.AOD wrote:I'm a bit disappointed that you decided not to incorporate some of my suggestions, most specifically:
Olympe(?): Talk to the rival about the possibility of stopping the fight…!
Ahh! Rakan disassembles in midair!
Let me try a mid term:
Tell the rival to stop the fight!
What do you say?
2. Editing.