My FreeWill™ dictates me that such arguments would be tedious, pointless and of no consequence to the final outcome.

It was not meant as an explanation, but just as a reminder. My previous posts were quite old and could easily be forgotten, while it was indeed relevant to my decision. Thinking of ...

I've send ^Ripper a msg about this.

Just so we're clear : First, Last, Too late.
And no, I don't want to speak about it.

In case you were bored Guren...

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Nova: In people's hearts, there's no boundary between “normality” and “insanity” and so on , // In people's hearts, the barrier between “normality” and “insanity” doesn't exist ,

N: there's only a “thousand forms of insanity”. // there's only a “thousand ...

"Oye" doesn't even sound English.
My bad, it's spelled oi . See here for some uses.

to do an emergency treatment
Treatment . I would have sweared treatment is uncountable, alas it's both a countable AND an uncountable. On the other hand, in each of their examples, they remove the preceding ...

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K: For now I managed to do an emergency treatment. // In the meantime, I managed to do an emergency treatment.
This one doesn't fit in the context. It sounds weird.

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F: Oye ! Stop bullying him! // Hey ! Stop bullying him!
If you want to keep his "country" dialect, you should keep ...

Alright, this time, let's try this the other way around : script-check, THEN typesetting.

p03 f3 : "Just in time." then "It's the right time to ask'ya". It sounds weird to be repeating "time" so close.

p03 f3 : "the one in the middle" --> "the middle one" fits better with the rest. Or, wouldn't ...

A6: For only trapping it , it's in this state . // After trapping your arm , look in what shape it's in .
You've got to be kidding me... We ask about "trapping" and you change everything else but this word... Even more, it kind of doesn't match with the next phrase. Well, it could, but with slight ...

- it's. They don't know what is chasing them. Guy? Girl? Robot? So "it". :)
Therefore :

p02 f2 : "Who the heck is that" --> "What the heck is that" ?

Well, it doesn't matter very much I guess.

the original verb has not that "to pull" meaning. It can be "to ensnare" though.
By any chance, does ...

We'll soon be contacted. :good:
Yeah, sure. They look like that and tend to knock ***REALLY*** hard on your door...

Anyway. I've got a slight problem about these ones :

p02 f1 : "it's" --> "he/she's" ?
p18 f3 : "trapping" ??? Wouldn't "pulling (on) it" or something else more adequate ?
p18 f4 ...

No. Because he's AWESOME !

P.S. : I apologize about being non-native english speaker.

Thank you. The release will be some times later.

Damn, I have to redo the credits page... Couldn't you name your account "Ashod" ???

Well, it's been related for the past 111 chapters, so I was assuming it's also related for this one.

And, no, Google Translate wouldn't help.

I don't know if all changes suggested were implemented in the original post. Too bad, too late.

Release pending until said "Side Text".

Missing p27's side text (on the left).

Yep, it's in an earlier post. Keep looking. Again. And again.

Sergio Nova wrote:What has ever happened to ashod?
Are we once more without a translator?

Yes we are. Ashod agreed to translate the 2 last chapters, but no more. Hence the "Looking for a new EN-JP translator" message on the last credits page.

Sergio Nova wrote:Nope! Number 2 doesn't.

edit: BTW, Sergio... Misty.

Translation done, cleaning done, typesetting in progress, new script-checks incoming. Should be done... errr... somewhere this week... or the next... maybe... Well, somewhere around that !

By the way... Isn't Misty a chick ???
(Yeah, you're spotted Mistyman...)

NKato wrote:Thanks, Lemon. Really, THANKS.

To be precise, I'm not the only one who worked on this. Read the credits page : There's a whole bunch of people who gave time for your read. I merely made the release post.

Page 24 - She is called Gally and Alita in two different balloons.
Oh, you mean p25. Well, blame the proofreaders.

maybe it was too soon to release anything
After almost 26 days of proofreading, I think it's fine. Sure there may be mistakes and you can spend a year finding adjustments to the ...

^Ripper wrote:PS: Oh yeah, the credits page... make sure it reads: rippersanime.info

GODAMMIT!!! Have to change the template...

Funny, it looks like there a wildcard ban on something like "alita" + "111". I had to rename it to something else. If the new name gets wildcard-blocked to, I'll change to something really generic and unrelated to GLO, like "Candy91119" or the like.

For now, fixed... I guess...

p31 : Missing 2 "boxed" texts (Ido and Figure) as well as side text.

All good ! Awaiting final corrections !